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Old 09-14-03, 10:28 PM   #1
trippin59
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sanity

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i feel like i'm losen every part of me
slowly slippin is my sanity
darkness overwhelming
evil is dwelling fell like i'm bout
to snap
stuck in this pshcotic trap
all that comes is rap
dog u better watch your back
cause you gonna get attacked
Insanity has claimed me
you ought too see
how crazy i can be
while on the speep
courcein threw my vains is pcp
i got company
two minds inside my brain
you don't know what i'm capable of
no room for love
just filled wit hate
i'm gonna b in an asylum at this rate
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Old 09-17-03, 08:04 AM   #2
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i like it. i think everyone feels like tehy are goign out of their minds sometimes. good job
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Old 09-19-03, 02:18 PM   #3
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can relate nothing that i don't like about it good shit. keep droppin
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Old 09-22-03, 07:44 PM   #4
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The rawness of this piece was very apparent. But it seemed to overtake the overall execution of the piece. So the emotions were there. But the direction was very little.

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