lionello took it wit da flow, and da punches. although there weren't many good ones. try addin personals into ya battles. botha ya need to elevate
vote-lionello

BOTH THESE VERSES WERE NOT IMPRESSIVE AT ALL.. BUT LIONELLO DROPPED A TOTALLY WACK ASS VERSE.. SO IM A HAVE TO GO WITH TOBIAS ARNOLD ON THIS ONE

Tobias did take this one, despite the fact that he stole his alias from a lackluster series of children's books (see: Animorphs' Series). Unfortunately, Front Lines voters seem to emulate and vote for the writer who includes the most dick and/or cum and/or mom-lines. .

Quotables.
Tobias

best line of the piece which, unfortunately, isn't quite an accolade. .

Lionello

The search for something even remotely quotable was, in actuality, hellacious. . This was the best I could come up with, I suppose!

VOTING SCALE -
wordplay - Tobias
punches - tie
vocabulary - Tobias
structure - Tobias
flow - tie

VOTE: Tobias

CRITIQUE
Tobias: Punches sucked - sorry . . Incorporate humor into them, use Current Events/Sports -- whatever!

Lionello: Work on flow. A LOT.

Poll voted.
-Amby

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Upping for more votes. I think this is 3rd? 4th? I'll check to make sure I don't up this too often. Please throw votes at this battle! I'd very much appreciate them. Whichever way you feel they should go. Thanks.