lets go................

10 lines...............

both drop within 2 hrs.......

that mean noth drops gotta be in by 7 30 pm...........

check in.....1

this is ma checkity check in............................1

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uhh, the callout said 1 hour
u need the extra time?

nah ma fault..................1 hour...............calm down..................

so both drops in from now till 6 30.................1

when u come to face me u practicen by yellin at ya self, its a catastrophy/
u talk and argue wit ya self so much its like u got a split personality/

i drop knowledge on u suka like i get brainz on a daily basis/
u try n copy ma shyt but even if u put paper over it u still couldnt trace it/

when i rhyme u stop look and listen as if god speaks/
but b4 u dropped a word u knew ud be in the ground so u took a head start n bit the street/

my rhymes are like if u were trapped in ya words, leavin u stuck behind bars/
so i leave u lost and confused like straight men in gay bars/

this is commin to a end so ill leave yall wit a punch thaTs hardcore/
im sad to kill this boy so ill CRY ON THE GROUND to leave EMOTION on the FLOOR/

Like Rodney King on Halloween ya "taking a beating with treatings"/
X-cution could only "elevate above E" frequently if he drank Hi-C/

Closeted fag reps NY on the outside but "plays for san fransisco"/
Just got the grenade in his av cuz he's always "ready to blow"/

Sumthin jumpin? not ya wins, ure gett'n "out-done" like sex in pub-lic/
Dumb kid, calls himself a vet but still got scrolling text in his sig/

Just a newb with 46 wins, not a single one worth report'n/
I'm say'n "goodbye to this newborn" like last second abortions/

E . Motion spits "fires mo' sicker" than aids patients in the burn ward/
Plus I just "snapped" ya back to wackness like a fuck'n bungee cord/

Clarification In line 3, San Fransisco is where all the gays live
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damn, e took this shit. i kinda expected more from x...no beef, but the punches on e's part were nice and solid

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for votes people..........................letrs go.................good shyt E......................1

wtrf wit the newbie vote...................w/e..................i betta not get d/r on.............................1

damn this was a weak ass battle....fuck heres the layout

flo-x
structure-e
punches-e
style-x
vocab-e
overall-e

ima have to give this one to e....he had a better verse

vote fairly in this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79854

AND X U SLUT U FORGOT TO POLL...lol...

Metaphores - tie
Vocabulary - X
Enjoyment - X
Punchlines - X
Wordplay - tie
Creativity - tie
Personals - E
Structure - E
Opener - X
Finisher - E
Multies - E
Flow - X
Overall - X (5-4)

^PROPS to both of ya...

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79685

oops.....lol....good thing i didnt poll yet...i got the verses mixed up ....it should look like this

flo-e
structure-x
punches-x
style-e
vocab-x
overall-x

vote-x-ecution

both verses were weak as fuck....but im givin it to x cuz he had the better punches and flo...

^thats 13 years olds aren't supposed to have voting rights, they don't know what the hell theyre do'n