I did not write this with ANY of my skill, i did not use any hot vocab,no internals or anythin....
But what u should do is look for a message.....!!!

it aint ur typical message....!!



Be what you can,achieve the greatnes you behold//
Rite theyre in your hands is what was once ever so cold//
Aafter you sold your soul to Satan,death was there uppon you//
No one was happily there to help,no sheets or covers to wrap you//
Do what your good you lil bitch,use power to do what turns u on//
Overate with nothing since ur wack,please,i dont wana know were u from//
Never try to judge me,cuz its you thats always judged//
Back in the day u were a hoe,in the park stabbin mens fudge//
It comes around what goes around,so prepare ur self for what might occur//
This aint the best of what i do,but unlike you,mine aint manure//
Chris got this truthfully,full of honesty,ur up in Fag land,Boss of monastrys//
High in ur powers ordering kids to suck ur dick like the catholics dynasty//

yo...any oppinions for this piece of shit...!?!?

holla at it and ill holla at urs....peace

There was no message delivered...only attempts

Seems like your quite insecure from how you was rapping...if not then that must of been dissing the reader...not a very good job done

Work on your flow and vocab...

Just try rhyming bigger words...or put more rhymes in

Get the basics done first

Yo bro...I aint some noob.... If u look at my name clearly ull get to know who i really am...And u know i dont need to elevate....

If u look cearflul aswell, ull clearly see the message...!!!

LOL....Holla if u find it....and if u get who i am...!!!

I know who you are...

A respectful english mc

I know your skilled..well i heard you were...and i guess this wasn't your best

Cuz i didn't see no rhyme scheme nor any vocab...and the imagery lacked

I guess this was a key...i guess i musn't be getting the secret message

But the message closing to being dropped was don't judge other cuz no-ones perfect themself


L-O-L