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War Machine: Three Ways to Die
IP: BCAC B488
Broadsword Style....
Automatically cause tragedy and severe brutality Incompatible with average flows so rabid blows'll damage thee Insanity, demanding me to avidly storm your homeland Born a Nomad, created and devestated, the way I'm programmed Slave to no man, I survive off of multiple resources Mortals' weak forces, of life, provide the meat courses Style's malicious, wild and vicious, more than a fist is Anti-Christian, stalk Earth during Solar Eclipses Forty clips is, insufficient, can't the murder the militiant Verbal Imprisonment, form savage lines from words of innocence No heathen'll leave without reason to scream, breathin' with ease Eased into dreams, of heavily bleedin' from demons with heat Savages, ravagin' villages with mechanics we're brandishin' Massacre, mass murder severin' heads with several air passages A masochist, chew through ya with the chains of an executioner Lucifer, spawned from eternal hellfire that moves with words Change of Weapon: Longsword Style... Displayin rawness, every verse that I spray is flawless You're harmless, any motherfucker that ain't worship me is Godless You're causeless, don't fuck with an oxen that'll slay 'n gore you Metaphors mutilate your body, your enemies will be prayin' for you This war explores the genre of a horror story Created my rhymes in an underground secret laboratory To travel back to my roots, discover how I remain this raw The truth was revealed, I contain the genes of Genghis Khan And the list chases on and on, in fact, I'm the only male To have my soul resemble that of who drank from the Holy Grail Determine fates...you wack crabs I exterminate Murder fakes, War Machine: You gotta earn that rank Nobody's fuckin' with me in my primal final form Shatter your vital spinal cord, with my homicidal tidal storm I'm immaculate, levitate the mic with a magic spit Tragic shit, tyrant sperm exists in my ejaculate Fuck what you know, it's really your preference to see But the term "Holy Smokes" is actually a reference to me Change of Weapon: Bo style... Style's drunken, met Satan face-to-face and punched him I should stop sayin' I'm God, I just realized that I'm above him Use black magic concoctions, and voodoo potions of sorts Shove your tombstone down six feet deep, behead your motionless corpse I could strike the Apollo and succeed, and be holdin' out Kidnapped Loki and Thor, then I called Odin out I'm tired of humans, stealing the souls of immortals is my forte Resurrect every last Anglo-Saxon warrior and invade Norway Emcees attempt to pierce my armor, but I have immunity I gather whole communities to battle me just to humor me Most battle events to me are like Jerry Springer, staged lady fights I'm turnin' Christian crews into Jewish cartoons like eight crazy nights Sheep are gettin' smarter, told 'em God was dead and they claimed my fault My strikes are unbelievable so take your wounds with a grain of salt I got a crew of street brawlers that clench fists and clash Take your brain a few years back like the ghost of Christmas Past. Drop some Feedback.. |
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IP: 8E37 95F9
nice fucking drop dunny
nice use of multis and vocab loved it keep em coming |
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IP: 2C91 0DC6
itz coo liked the whole formation of it cuzzo
aight 1
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Yo Lil mami on the drops.
Wins-1 TKO's-1 Loss-0 Wins- Mc Aines Losses- ::*~No One~*:: T.K.O's-Mc Aines..........and more to come............ |
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IP: DC1E A18E
Yo thinks for the feedback, Ill be posting some other shit today... Think i could some more feedback on this?
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IP: 5176 7D62
it was tight needed some fixing in sertain places but iull none the less
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IP: 5176 7D62
i need your help on the whole multi concept i havnt grasped it yet peep my drops
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IP: DC1E A18E
Alright no problem, Ill go check out some of your drops, but Ill have to do it in a little while, I got shit to take care of, But Ill help you out with it.
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IP: 5176 7D62
thnks
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IP: DC1E A18E
no probz
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IP: 02FF 893F
^ Stop the freeposting - both of you.
Anymore and i'll lock both your recent pieces. . Onto the piece. . I felt it, decent original topic to drop too, vocab was pretty avereage, but multi'd usage was top ntch, that gave the flow a stronger aspect, good use of internalk multi's too, which i like to see. I felt the first verse more than the other two, nothing really stood out to me as dope, but it wasnt a bad drop. Eace-Pay!
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IP: C7F2 4308
Well Just Uppin, Seeing If I Could Get Anymore Responses.
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IP: C1DA C961
shit was tight bro,liked the flow you had goin in this,keep it commin,peace
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IP: 8AA2 2D8F
Yo that shit was fresh, you had good structure, kept it flowin smooth through the whole verse, nice style- peace
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