RapVerse.com Community - Tim.E. Tumurk vs COM (250+posts to vote)

09-21-03, 06:38 PM

#16

Rappad

Guest

Posts: n/a

Joined:

Status:

Text Record: 0-1

Audio Record: 0-0

Graphics Record: 0-0

IP: 65C8 FCCD

ok lets see
Tim-ok verse, I've seen you battle before, didn't like this too much, punches didn't really hit hard, multi's were there but seemed forced.
Com-also not a great verse, but better structure, harder punches, flowed smoothly.

Punches-com
Flow-com
Wordplay-tim
Multi's-tim
Creativity-com

Vote=Com

no hate

09-21-03, 06:39 PM

#17

COM

Yes I Know

Posts: 1,215

Joined: Aug 2003

From: England

Status: Offline

IP: 9B91 D0C6

------------------------------------------^-,
|||||||||| `--------' | O -----------UPPPIN
`----------------------------^----------|
`\_,---------,---------,--------------'
/ XXXXXX /'| /' /
/ XXXXXX / `\ /' /
/ XXXXXX /`-------/
/ XXXXXX /
/ XXXXXX
(_______ )

09-21-03, 06:58 PM

#18

Artikqlit

BANNED: Bitin / Alias

Posts: 870

Joined: May 2003

From: ...Philly...

Status: Offline

Text Record: 36-16

Audio Record: 0-0

Graphics Record: 0-0

IP: 82A0 90A4

iight..no hate too any of y'all...this is juss how i saw it...

FLOW = COM
PUNCHES=COM
PERSONALS=COM
WORDPLAY= TIM
METAS= COM
MULTIS= COM (Tim...U Had A Lot But They Weren't Needed)
OVERALL=COM

TIM..u shoulda attacked COM more in this battle...alotta filler lines...alotta self-hype shit...nd wen u did thro a "punch" it din't hit hard...COM's shit wuz ok...alot of that gory shit..cut down on that..focuse more on ur opponent..pretty good battle..

VOTE - COM

VOTE=COM

09-21-03, 07:11 PM

#19

bone crusher

BANNED

Posts: 206

Joined: Apr 2003

Status: Offline

Text Record: 10-1

Audio Record: 0-0

Graphics Record: 0-0

IP: 4672 A5E0

Quote:

originally posted by tim.e. tumurk
I told him I would murk him but he still wanted to battle..oh well
So ima spit these punches right to him and make sure I deliver the l
dis was a lame line, nothin stood out but flow so its mostly filler

Well guess your gonna lose cause like survivor only the "strongest survive"
Damn kidd why you gotta cry?, in this battle your the weakest link so I gotta say "goodbye!"
dis is wack, period! so so flow

Hope your ready to die, damn this verse took a matter of minutes
Your name will be diplinished..but it took you forever to write something that was whack from start to finish
forced wordplay in here, I pitty dis line

I crunched his brain and turned him insane I even twisted his structure
Com came out ugly cause his parents were alien abductors
was dis actually a punch?

You came to me crying that you were whack well heres some things to do
Hang yourself then jump off a cliff cause ill always be better then you!
personal but weak

Com was denied entry to the lll, now he's facing one of their best
This kidd failed the test, he made a vital mistake and for that ive sent him to rest
ok personal but not good enuff

overall i have to say dis verse was weak, nothin stood out
flow fell off for about 2 lines, then da forced wordplay n weak personals so
ratin: 4/10

Quote:

originally posted by com
Born two face, it made your name a split decision
Performing lyrical surgery, I’m gonna make a quick incision
good wordplay/personal

You need tips in division, coz you can’t share this win
Get washed, you smell like vodka, while I’m compared to jin
1st line was good but 2nd was weak

I tear your skin off your skeleton, I can see you got a nerve
You only come to the site, to look at members pics and perv
lol, damn funny yet da 1st line kept me ponderin

So swerve when you see me, you herb, don’t come near me
I could battle in a dress, and you’d still fucking fear me
i believe dis is da weakest punch in da verse, it was too forced

Sincerely I think your rhyme flows just like a slow poem
It ain’t time to murk… it’s time for tumurk to go home
flow fell off here but dis was an ok bar

So pack up your stuff, don’t return, you’ve been spurned
I send tumurk round the bend… at every fuckin turn
dis was ok but I prefer to say........weak

i have to say dis had a good flow but dats not what da breakdown is about so here: it had more punches dan Tim.E. Tumurk, more humor n i think it stood out more but with limited wordplay
ratin:6/10

so my vote is to>COM

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
COM	5	100.00%
Tim.E. Tumurk	0	0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

Thread Tools	Search this Thread
Show Printable Version Email this Page	Search this Thread: Advanced Search
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode