Verse #1: (written by Gene Pool)
alright that’s it, Masta C ur such a fuckin bitch! Y u always gotta step to my shit?
But u know what I’m sick of this, to think how it ever came to this/
u and me? We ain’t homies and never will be, still beef, cuz u bring stale beats/
backstyle, and rip u slowly, u woulda never made it if u wouldn’t have known me/
cuz ur a far step below me, ur style weak, rememba?! I’m the one that brought u to the streets!/
And u’d be dead, if I wouldn’t have helped u get out of that debt/
next time u get into that shit, I’ll leave it to them loan sharks to lay u at rest/
it’s time to take the test, u think u can out best my crest? Bitch u studied my riffs/
read that shit from left to right, but obviously now u think u can put up the fight!/
But this shits gonna end with ur life! If u don’t get ur fuckin rhymes right/


Verse #2: (written by Masta C)
My fucking styles weak?!..yeah weak as a damn-tank/
I spit so much it forms a “pool”…and this man-sank/
And I don’t gotta read your shit…cause half of it don’t make-sense/
Yeah I had to get you to help me outta the debt?…I was the one to pay-rent/
And if we would ever fight…you would not last..not at all/
Cause im the one full of ideas…without me you would fall/
And this bitch enjoys gay bashings…just like his uncle that’s-gay/
Plus hes getting fired from his job…so he really lacks-pay/
And im tired of working with you…cause you’re a pain-in-the-ass/
We were cool once before…but you cant put change-in-the-past/


Verse #3: (written by Gene Pool)
oh so I’m the fag? What about that time u ran through the gay bar with ur dick flailin away/
ya u almost nearly forgot about that day, din’t u, and I had to pull u out or else they woulda been but fuckin u!
U woulda almost had me bro, but u forgot the fact that ur brain acts on slo-mo u fuckin hobo/
And I may be losin my job, but at least I’m legit, unlike u, u sell ur drugs to little kids, and ur dick to little chicks!/
So fuck ur shit! Cuz ur style of rap is wacked fatter then the spread in ur ass crack! Now that is wack!/
Now thas gotta be the reason y ur ass is so fat, cuz u’ve proply taken to many cumshots in the past/
So next time before u act up, think back, at all the crap u’ve made me put out with/
Cuz next time I might not be there to help u, well, maybe to drown u, to de-crown u/
Cuz my style is demandingly profound to u, cuz my sound pushes right through to u/
Straight rip ur shit, cuz my riffs spit sick, and vaporize all ur weak ass shit... bitch!!!/


Verse #4: (written by Masta C)
Fuck man at least I get pay…and I can actually get-laid/
Cause I got all this shit going for me…I got shit-made/
And your not one to talk…cause I caught you fucking ya sis/
Sipping ya piss…made lame excuses, saying I was the one you missed?!/
I think you got the fucked up “genes”…cause your losing-it/
Taking to much dick in ya mouth..its bruising-shit/
And your styles just “out dated”…its going all rotten/
And yeah I saw that poster on ya door…saying “got-men?”/
Bitch ill just smack-ya…never back-ya…cause ya honestly just-suck/
So fuck you bitch…don’t fuck with me…cause ill leave ya a crushed-fuck/


Verse #5: (written by Gene Pool)
alright look, let’s just play this shit by the book, cuz obviously we both go good/
so let’s flip the script on this shit, and play it like a trick/
so quick, cuz we bust lyrics and make ppl hit the ditch/
straight hit shit, and ppl just sit in their own piss/
cuz we dangerous, when we both latch grip, and blast shit/
get cash paid, cuz we all out insane, and aren’t scared to take this shit straight to the game/
cuz we ain’t lame! All tha otha bitches act tame, soon as we mention are names/
Gene Pool, mean, gut slash and crash, cuz the mosh pit neva lasts, when I straight bust with gatts/
And Masta C, he just all out insanely crazy, see no hesitation if bitches be complainy/
so possibly ppl are messin with the wrong duo maybe, Masta C tell these ppl what we like when twistin heat/


Verse #6:
Me and Gene-Pool..our team-rules…cause we that ill we Cough-n-up-blood/
You go against us…we “beat you” till your tender…you just soft-n-ya-done/
We just rip-crazy…cause y’all get-lazy…and we cant be stopped!/
We going to the top…we just hot…bullets melt before we get popped/
Bitches cant get past us..cause we solid as a rock….no pentatration/
Cant seep in the cracks…so the only way you can beat us..is if ya send-ya-nation/
We just the leanest…and we are the meanest…we don’t pack-the-heat/
Cause if ya fuck with us….your better to just face us..cause ya turn ya back-ya-beat/
And our rhymes are in perfection….cause we always leave all in question/
This is our profession….cause y’all wonder whats gonna be in our next open mic section/

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Please leave us some feedback on this peice, something different i think, much appreciated, thanks.

ill mane.like to see mo shit like at .cold.cold.holla
W.C. is back

CTF(represent)

Hey thanks for the feedback, Keep it coming in, much appreciated, thanks.

First two verses were pretty good, then i felt you guys kinda lost what ya had in the next two, but the last two it was picked back up, good multi's, i'd say uppin your vocab would help, but this was pretty good.

Thanks man, yeah i kinda lost it in the second verse lol oh well but thanks for being honest, Keep The FeedBack coming, much appreciated, thanks.

thanx for the feedback peeps and keep it comin.

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Uppping this for some more feedback, if you leave some feedback its much appreciated, thanks.

yo guys uppin this. just wanna get some more feedback on this piece before I post mine and Masta C's new collab tomorrow called "nice guys finish last (feat. masta C) so leave some more feedback ppl thanx in advance.

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jesus man. 38 views in this thing and no fuckin feedback??? what the hell? plz ppl if ur gonna check this song out then plz read it and leave us some feedback it would be much appreciated and thanx in advance.

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uppin this for some more feedback so come on ppl. put ur thoughts into words on what u think about this peice so we know what ppl wanna here and also if we get some more feedback on this piece I'll post up our new collab today. if not? well then I'll wait a day or two before I post so drop a note on what u think on this piece ppl's. muchly appreciated thanx in advance. peace.

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I think your topic was dope...I woulda like to of done on this topic

But...

Your Content and styles lacked majorly...there was like one or two multis of the most simplist ones...

Try to improve your rhymes or put more multis in...Keep the lines realting to the topic because i found alot of lines didn't

What you did do well was...

Choose a good topic and have set rhyme schemes with some ok lines

Stay up tWo

thanx for the feedback man I'll keep ur advice at mind so keep it comin peeps.

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nice peice, i was feelin that, good collab over all. up the vocab an put in one or two more metas i think that wud o the trick, just cause its a fairly long piece but good drop

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461