Yeah thanks for the feedback guys, its much appreciated, keep dropping some feedback on this, thanks.

aight this piece was long but good
easy read, flow was on point
the vocab was well placed, not forced
keep this up

if you would be so kind
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hey man thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, much appreciate, Thanks.

nice piece....flowed well, vocab was good, and stayed on topic..chrous could us a lil work but other than that no real complants....keep dropping...

Hey man thanks for the feedback, yeah the chorus could use some work, but keep the feedback coming, much appreciated, thanks.

yeah i liked this one, flow, vocab and all that was tight, the chourus could use work, but you know that anyway. good drop. peace

thanx for all the feedback ppl. uppin this one last time for some more seeing that we proply won't be bringing out anything new today. thanx again for all the feedback so far.

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