Most of you aint real!
can’t come within 103 degree of being ill.

Multiply the earths circumfrence times radius filled-
to equate the flow that I filter distil like zympherhill.

Dehydrate- the 98~ percent water per body weight-
And witness a man who has no saliva glands-
spitting his monohydrate- till his larenex desinigrates-
to residues to sand.
I don’t even understand-
how I can stair into a vast air and mold
the globe into matrix code-
rip spit to microfragment from my asshole~to toilet bowl-
use the earth for my damn commode.

Flush your career down the drain, if you try and shit on me.
You got as much chance as colored armani in bleached laundry.

The probability- for most m.c’s-
to survive against M.K.C lacks equivability-

like the survival statistic ratios for H.I.V.-
death occurs INEBIDEBLY.

you probably listen to me and think mentally-
you can last inside the ring-
in battles I abuse PUNCHLINES to samples of SWING.
bring pain and suffering-
Viscious with rap analogue aint no dumb luck-you get stuck-
So read and memorize a porn dialogue cause you suck
-plus get fucked.

This isn’t a battle addressed to one but every~one and any~one-
Who claim they spit only the real but got prostetic tongues and lungs.
I hate you!!!!!!!!
if I have to- I’ll hate the god that made you~ too.

This is war and I know you don’t want none.
Life is a GIFT you should return it for a refund.
Pray to Christ-Or I can help with and leave you ripped and stitch.
my MOTHER gave me LIFE so im a SON of a dog if LIFES A BITCH.
Your style switch-from being pussy to dick-
So now GAY~ASS is the only title you FIT.
Did you get it?

probably not cause you hate gay jokes-
and get sensative over the words spoke.
nah your rhymes dont suck but they deep throat-
with no gag reflext on text no wonder you like to qoute-
what i wrote.

dickride-in stride- if you want but like KFC you like your man meat with 2 in the side.

for you cock jocks....my condomn brand

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UPPIN

hahahaha
good shit compadre

'This isn’t a battle addressed to one but every~one and any~one-
Who claim they spit only the real but got prostetic tongues and lungs
^nice

and the last para was funny shit too.,
again another different piece...vocab flkow etc blah blah all good

thnks pop i apreciate waite till you see the next i got an ill idea im trying to get heads that can pull it off togeather

funny ass shit... nah on the real some good imagery

"This is war and I know you don’t want none.
Life is a GIFT you should return it for a refund."

Stood out for me...

Keep writin yo.

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Ohh shit... damn dawg i felt this entire peice. the vocabulary was superb, i though it flowed very nicely. mann i had my head swangn the whole time i read it. talk about some nice punchlines...

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Flush your career down the drain, if you try and shit on me.
You got as much chance as colored armani in bleached laundry.

Dehydrate- the 98~ percent water per body weight-
And witness a man who has no saliva glands-
spitting his monohydrate- till his larenex desinigrates-
to residues to sand.
I don’t even understand-
how I can stair into a vast air and mold
the globe into matrix code-

This is war and I know you don’t want none.
Life is a GIFT you should return it for a refund.
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all these definitly put a smile on my face and kept readn maniacally... seriously some dope shit dawg... hope to see more. keep it droppn and much propz. one.

definitly an ill peice..you came was with high quality potential, showed a lot of power an resulted to a good flow an good word play props man keep it up

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

*********goes to podium snatches LL'S VAN GAURD and takes a blunt out CANIBUS hands'****************
BITCH you herd them im getting better so why dont both you faget ass has beens' bounce.......???????????



i love you all muahs muahs!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol

good shit brother....

Most of you aint real!
can’t come within 103 degree of being ill.
^^^good shit i was laughin.... reminded me of some shit ''

you probably listen to me and think mentally-
you can last inside the ring-
in battles I abuse PUNCHLINES to samples of SWING.
bring pain and suffering-
Viscious with rap analogue aint no dumb luck-you get stuck-
So read and memorize a porn dialogue cause you suck
-plus get fucked.
^^^ALSO dope


good job i enjoy readin your shit... hahahah i felt like takin that condom for a sec... jk

hit my shit up dawg

aight i will def peep your ish

Good stuff...

Funny verse...

Like to see non-played concepts...

Everything on point here...

Peep
Huh? ft Chrit

GOOOOOOOD ISH as ussual......WORD

RESPECT and yea we should do a collabo Again

IM DOWN TO COLLAB