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09-24-03, 12:42 PM
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Looking Back
IP: A04B E7DD
Think rap for the verses, and r n' b beat and for the bridge and hook.
[Bridge] There’s No Comparison, There’s No Competition... Just Relaxation n’ Security... With Added Love And Purity... [yo,] How Can We Ever be At The End Of The Line... How Can It Be Even Close To Our ‘Time’... Not Even A Distinction Or A Blurry Sign... Your Mine, Is Me Loving You Such A Crime... We Went To Hell And Back, Then Back Again... I Was Neither Distrustful Nor Addicted To Cocaine... Through The Rain, Now I Can Understand Our Pain... But Times Running Out, My Emotions Beginning To Drain... I Just Wanna Be Yours, Go Back n’ Forth From Emotional Wars... Open New Doors, Buy Gifts For His n’ Hers... Is It Insane, Wrong, Is This Where I Belong?... [Bridge] There’s No Comparison, There’s No Competition... Just Relaxation n’ Security... With Added Love And Purity... [Hook]x2 There’s No One That Can Compare... I’ll Rush Home Just To See You There... You’re the Amen, In My Prayer... Not A Year, Without A Joyless Tear... We’re Just Two People In The Right Gear... In 30 Years, When We’ve Both Drifted Fully Apart... Will You Still Remember Me In Your Loving Heart... Will You Still Reminisce The Day, We Had To Depart... We Were As Sharp As A Dart, But Now Your Gone... I Knew Somewhere That Our Love Wouldn’t Last Long.... But I’ve Gotta Keep Strong. Knowing I Done Nothing Wrong... But I Keep Your Memories, Along, In My Broken Spirit... Never Once Questioned Our Relationship, I Just Rolled With It... You And Me, In Memory Together Forever... Thought We Were Just To Expressively Clever... 2 Years Ahead, Us Breaking Up, NEVER!... [Bridge] There’s No Comparison, There’s No Competition... Just Relaxation n’ Security... With Added Love And Purity... [Hook]x2 There’s No One That Can Compare... I’ll Rush Home Just To See You There... You’re the Amen, In My Prayer... Not A Year, Without A Joyless Tear... We’re Just Two People In The Right Gear... I Never Freaked Out, Got Into Guns n' Thugs... Only Ever High On Your Special 'Drugs'... You Were Always There For Me, I Was For You... But Who Knew, That The Prophcies Were True... We Would Split Up, Before Our Relationship Reached Year 2.... But I Still Stuck With It, I Just Rolled With It... I Thought We Would've Made It, But Evidently Not... In Vain Now, Were All The Pointless Battles We Fought.... If I've Learned Anything, It's Taught Me How To Act... Never Live By Rumour, Always Live By The Fact.... Maybe I Did Over-React, But You Still Got Your Teeth Intact... I Could've Cracked, Attacked And Hit With Devastating Impact... But I Didn't, I Would'nt, Your Know I Couldn't... (BITCH) [Bridge] There’s No Comparison, There’s No Competition... Just Relaxation n’ Security... With Added Love And Purity... [Hook]x4 There’s No One That Can Compare... I’ll Rush Home Just To See You There... You’re the Amen, In My Prayer... Not A Year, Without A Joyless Tear... We’re Just Two People In The Right Gear... You know..ha..ha...[gunshot] |
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09-24-03, 04:19 PM
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IP: A04B E7DD
uppin', lotta sleeping in Open Mic these days..
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09-25-03, 12:16 PM
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IP: A04B E7DD
uppin' this shit!
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09-25-03, 12:41 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 3147 668A
open mics are getting long now!!!
the flow on this was pretty good but i think it needed a little fixing the topic was a good appraoch on a usually played topic mulitis lacked but vocab made up for it If I've Learned Anything, It's Taught Me How To Act... Never Live By Rumour, Always Live By The Fact.... ^^how true is that, my fav line if you would be so kind (sorry but all 3 fell asleep...) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183 |
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09-26-03, 12:50 PM
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IP: F229 1E93
FFS, the amount of sleepin' that goes on in OM now is ridiculous, not just this piece, but Fgee's had to up his about 6 times before another reply, same with Word~Perfect!
Get a hold of yourself Rb! |
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09-26-03, 01:21 PM
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IP: 63D7 39EF
This was a good peice, it was a good read too i thought, your flow was good, your multies were ok maybe use a little more, you vocab was good though, overall id say it was good.
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09-27-03, 08:03 PM
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IP: F229 1E93
Read the my other uppin's......
Uppin' .. lol |
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09-27-03, 11:08 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 6782 8AD9
upping for ya.. people dont sleep
i told you already how good this was... so no feedback from me lol Its That Simple (me and masta c) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82007 |
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