sex.
better than life itself, great for ya health, could increase ya wealth.
self.
expressions, and lessons, and sessions.
aggressions.
pain that migrates threw ya veins. drives you insain with no chance to refrain.
defamation.
the creation of false truiths. complimentary to ya youth, lies in a booth.
solitary confinement.
the realignment, silent, violent constaraint.
freedom.
see them, look slim, they going to get there even if they have to swim.
exercise.
the realization, that its time for a new foundation, the creation of a new nation.
people.
gather young souls, express ya selves as individuals and wholes, if ya cute or ya look like a troll.

elavate...you got good wordplay an vocab...but you could really increase your thoughts an explanitory vision...read it over an c wut you can fix...no hate..just help

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