In the silhouettes of silence the regrets of violence maintain in the mundane city streets... but here remorse will leave you slain, the pain of hesitation leaves you in devestation in your defeats...
never found it in me to trust, bound by this unjust placement in the ghetto... placed in the forefront of danger, blunt and anger inside released with a quik draw of the siletto... but why live by the knife if you die by the gun? a life without sun in darkness is like another day in hell... the evil-n-decietful hate is just simple fate yet one day i plan of rising out of the shadows casting of the curse, the spell... so i kick these rhymes to help me through the shitty times despite the stress seein' me becomin' less world lying heavy on my chest still its all good cuz one day I'm gonna leave this hood... its all good, all good...

wow the flow was crazy!!!
from the 1st line u had me like WOW

flow was on point, vocab was very well used, mutlis were there 2... great job kid

if you would be so kind
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^^^^ sleepin'?

1st one is being hit up...2nd 2 fell way asleep

Yeah this was a pretty good peice i thought, good read, your flow was good, your vocab was good also, and your multies were pretty good i thought, but it was a good read overall i thought, keep dropping, and if you get the chance leave some feedback on one of my peices that you see, much appreciated, thanks.

^^^^

that was a hot flow......nice work

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