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IP: C667 C267
Topic: Mindless
fade away,once had,is now gone,and missed very much so when i dream of family,what makes me wonder were all my thoughts go am i lost...No,im still hear,but were am i,what happend,where do i dwell why makes life so inportant,what makes you,your self is it personality,looks,wisdom, or thoughts all togther am i made for a reason,or just to live life in displeasure will i rember who i am,or what i was,when im in better places what causes the mind to rember,voices,saying,or even rember faces we think were the most inteligent race,but what if theres some other is there something ur minds hold,that might hold mine under mindless in fact,is this a word or state of mind but if ur mindless, how can u state anything,with out a mind hold life tighter,and live life to the fullest,keep ahold dont let go keep thrusting im not insance,in fact am i just mindless or is it just me
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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center> <center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center> |
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come on peeps what do u all think about this shit...holla back wid some feed back
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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center> <center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center> |
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i thought that post was pretty good, the flow was on target through most of the post, i was feelin the wordplay and content, i liked how u drew out the topic at hand(u know what i mean?), but anyway, the content was tight, overall that was pretty damn good for a topical verse, so good job, keep it up.
yo if u have the time can u hit this up? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558 thanx peace..... |
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