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Old 09-28-03, 10:11 PM   #1
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Topic: Mindless

fade away,once had,is now gone,and missed very much so
when i dream of family,what makes me wonder were all my thoughts go
am i lost...No,im still hear,but were am i,what happend,where do i dwell
why makes life so inportant,what makes you,your self
is it personality,looks,wisdom, or thoughts all togther
am i made for a reason,or just to live life in displeasure
will i rember who i am,or what i was,when im in better places
what causes the mind to rember,voices,saying,or even rember faces
we think were the most inteligent race,but what if theres some other
is there something ur minds hold,that might hold mine under
mindless in fact,is this a word or state of mind
but if ur mindless, how can u state anything,with out a mind
hold life tighter,and live life to the fullest,keep ahold dont let go keep thrusting
im not insance,in fact am i just mindless or is it just me
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Old 09-29-03, 09:56 PM   #2
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come on peeps what do u all think about this shit...holla back wid some feed back
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Old 09-29-03, 10:58 PM   #3
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i thought that post was pretty good, the flow was on target through most of the post, i was feelin the wordplay and content, i liked how u drew out the topic at hand(u know what i mean?), but anyway, the content was tight, overall that was pretty damn good for a topical verse, so good job, keep it up.

yo if u have the time can u hit this up?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....
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