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Old 09-28-03, 10:29 PM   #1
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"Thank God Im Atheist"...

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DROOOPPP LINNNKKKSS...!!!

Thank God Im Atheist...

Im that colossal spirit awoken wit a title of god...
But why believe whats in a bible...
People read some pages of a book and give their life-to-me...
Thinkin it's righteous and im a futuristic returnin prophecy...
But really thy am that mythical dream whether or not...
Which you'll accept to up your self-esteem a quick notch...
Diverse in feelings, religions a figment of imagination...
As a puffy, clouded, haloed, silk awaiting heavan...
Is in hope your souls last station...
Yes, I was that man who died at 33 openly...
Nailed to a cross and locked in a cave...
Behind a large scaled rock....
Visciously slaughtered because of thoughts...
So I manipulated a confused man who sought...
For direction but I never missed-though...
That it takes a 19yr. old divine-like to say...
Maybe Moses was a schitzo...
As I stay speakin info. thats really non-existant...
While ya blame whats up-stairs when things have gone-distant...
See...People suicidally now killing for faith...
As 1000's of years ago peoples egos couldn't wait...
To write fairy tales while naming it the holy bible...
But now people follow its words...
So I got everyone on my puppet strings...
Listening to an unknown being...
Seeing I actually made a 100 commandments...
But you illiterates only see what you want to see...
I tumble and rise rural mountains, volcanoes, to please your eyes...
But really the only time in life I'll see the sea parted in half...
Is when theres a cents sign involved so let your mind do the math...
A 19yr. old god at heart, no longer pist...
As I so truly thank god I was developed atheist...
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Old 09-29-03, 12:45 PM   #2
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RHETORICAL

lmao thank GOD im Athiest
damn thats a good title

sea parted in half was a great line
and i find this peice to be remarkable
the visuals in it are so strong and teh feeling that you truly are thnakful is brilliant
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Old 09-29-03, 04:51 PM   #3
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thanx man appreciate it...
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Old 09-29-03, 04:53 PM   #4
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ima chicky
but your welcome another key id like to bring up is that the topic could have been more powerful if by chance you'd have included more of the Athiest belifes instead of disregarding so much of the religus ones
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Old 09-29-03, 07:33 PM   #5
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ok thanx..uppin
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Old 09-29-03, 08:30 PM   #6
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THATS ACTUALLY PRETTY GOOD!
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Old 09-29-03, 08:46 PM   #7
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lol..thank for the feedback..
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Old 09-30-03, 10:45 AM   #8
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damn dawg this was some crazy ass shit fool... omg i havent read something like this in a while... off the wall shit man.. did your homework for this one huh? hahah anyways a eye opener for me was
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But really the only time in life I'll see the sea parted in half...
Is when theres a cents sign involved so let your mind do the math...
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oh shit son hahah that shits so crazy, well keep spittn and hope to see more of ur visions, much props, one.
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Old 09-30-03, 11:33 AM   #9
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loll thanx thats my fav. line aswell...nah it took me a day...i had to do it for a fantasy poem in class and this is what came out my mind...thanx ..uppin
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