10 lines
20 minutes
no hate crew d/r n all that whackness

The kids fake... if he had a taste of my block he'd be the new scarface,
He's outta place, cuz he reps the east n hopes 4 W's to his name,
Paralyzed this bitch wit out hit'n hard...it's the good aim,
You could be like him kids if ya gave him your vote...A NO BRAIN!
I'm a forgivle man...i'll say sorry after this verse drops,
I know you've been de-moralized...but all shitty things must stop,
The sun will still rise 2morrow kid...ya it'll still be in sorrow,
Look at it this way...you can spend quality time cryin to mom ya know?
I just needed to inform you that...It's somethin that makes me feel useful,
Like teachin you personals...but i won't go into your personal issues...
Like how your broke....cuz ya spent all ya money on tissues


i hurried that like whoa... but i checked his other battle n he blows...
soo.... ya... did i go ova a line? well who cares... the kid probably...
won't even have his verse done in time

IIGHT MY NIGGA GOOD VERSE.........
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I AINT GOT NO BEEF WIT U JUS A FREINDLY BATTLE YA KNO

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DIS NIGGA OUT HURR TRYNNA RAP/
IM NEW IN DA GAME AND MY FLOWZ WILL HIT'EM LIKE W. SAPP/
DIS NIGGA CANT SEE ME/
I THOUGHT U KNEW I FLOAT LIKE A BUTTAFLY AND STING LIKE A BEE/
NIGGA WHEN I BLOW UP U GO WANNA BE ME/
I PULLED OUT MY TECH AND DIS NIGGA GONNA FLEE/
hi my name is....u wanna be eminem ass nigga u a bitch/
u betta shut tha fuck up kuz my trigga finger has an itch/
nigga u try to dis me u will get ya bitch ass shot/
i dont care who u run wit imma pull out tha glock/




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hi my name is took this easily..betta punches, flow etc...elevate e-syde...
not much more of an explanation is needed...

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VOTE - HMI

aight ima say hi my name is took this, but ima break it down...

flow-hi
wordplay-hi
vocab-hi
punches-hi
personals-hi
enjoyability-hi
overall-hi

yo props to both of ya, but i think hi my name is tore this cat up...

yo can u please to my open mic, its gettin slept on badly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace....

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Vote=My Name is

breakdown

punches-MNI
flow-Both
personals-nun
metas/similes-nun
multis-nun

MNI takes this jus cuz he had much better punches and structure

hit this u boys wit an honest one, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82510

E-Syde one word...elevate. Hi took this one in all categories easily. E-Syde you have potential, but your punches were weak as hell.

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