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Old 09-30-03, 08:37 AM   #1
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A Must Read Or I Will Kill Your Children

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HELLO MINE NAME IS COC K. JOC~R AND TODAY I WILL BE INTERVIEING WHAT UNDOUBTEBLY IS THE MOST FUCKED UP RAPPER IN THE GAME.
AFTER AN UNSUCCESSFUL TOUR AND VARIOUS SHOWS FOR THE SPECIEL OLYMPICS
( WHERE HE WAS CONFUSED FOR A DISLEXIC SCHITZO WITH TERRETS)
HE FINALLY RETURNS WITH A NEW ALBUM TITTLED AFTER THE FIRST SINGLE(NEVA BE FAMUS).
THE SINGLE WHICH HAS OUT SOLD HIS LAST SINGLE EP BY 3,SELLING 3 COPIES IS IN ROTATION BEING LITERALLY FLUG AT THE ARTIST ALONG WITH VARIOUS DEATH THREATS.

SO NONCENTZ HOW YOU DOING TODAY?
yo yo yo son im fucken great kid!
THREE COPIES YOU MUST BE PROUD?
yeah yeah son now im blowing up baby we talken double bronze baby whats fucken with that?????
RUMOR HAS IT YOUR OUTSTANDING BEAF WITH TOO SHORT HAS EARNED YOU A VERY WELL KNOW NAME.
yea yea naw mean son after i go beat by Benzino and BUshwick BILL im saying i had to show nigguz i wont pussy naw mean...?
and for the record LL you know you cheated....
comen in there with those mace ghostwrites....that shit aint right?

***beats begins to fade in####
WELL WONT YOU TELL THE WORLD ABOUT YOURSELF WHAT SEPERATES YOU FROM OTHER RAPPERS?

VERSE 1
try about 4000 degrees celcius to farenheit,
over 4 million m.c.'s that ...(eat my words)....
plus copy~bite-my copy~writes-
this aint a song this is they LAST WRIGHTS-
im attacking these hater-
put them on death row, placed in a chamber-
forced battle me an risk the danger -
of dying from my monoxide vapors.
if i wrote it- the world will qoute it- that automattic!
so AIR TIGHT im prostested by closterphobics- and asma~tics.
these rappers lines aint hot they barely luke warm_
while mine swarm_ like NUKE~bombs-my worst track is used for napalm.
write my rhymes with embalm...
for the preservation-of my presentation-find rappers for copulationthen.
fuck em for 17.99 plus taxation-
on the cd released for the population.
masses that gather get lathered...when i stand before the crowd-
scream out loud-
and REIGN supreme like a cumolous cloud.
NONCENTZ isnt a noun......
he's a human retoric-metaphoric-example of an animal considered prehistoric.
a teranassurus rex-on open text.
cause i can eat any m.c.'s flesh
use fresh-punchlines that punch~uate like sentence fragments- leaving their skin looking like MESH.
my style is the only thing-that aint broke so why rap aboute bling-
and rings?
id rather gather a thousand m.c.'s togeather and go on a shopping spree-for free.
that means forcing them to battle me-for their royalties-
i'll treat you like my bitch and recieve reverse allahmony.
if their every line's only a dime-
then i'm rhymen below 100 percent discount.
for seasoning your tongue with salt and pepper-
making you swallow the teeth out -your mouth.
and leaving the dj spining your dental record.
smacken every rapper with clapper acros this world-
CAUSE IM SURROUNDED BY SO MANY BITCHES YOU'D THINK I WAS ON THE REMIX FOR "I NEED A GIRL"!!!!!
NONCENTZ MOTHERFUCKER

WOW THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD INDEED THERE GUY. I DEFINETLY RESPECT YOU AFTER THAT.SO RUMOR HAS IT THAT YOUR GETTING OUT OF THE RAP GAME WHAT DO DOES THE FUTURE HOLD FOR SUCH A DANGEROUS M.C.
im retireing and gonna start singing r/b.....

WHAT?????????!!!!!!!!!
####THE REPORTER FADES OUT KICKING MY ASS######
TAKE THAT YOU FAKE AS LL SLASH JA RULE XTACY FAGET M.C.!!!!!!

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Old 09-30-03, 08:42 AM   #2
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Is u pissed?




Nice structure, ....some good flow in here...some iite punches, ..vocab was nice overall good piece

for the preservation-of my presentation-find rappers for copulationthen.
fuck em for 17.99 plus taxation-

Nice One^^


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Old 09-30-03, 08:44 AM   #3
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Good drop...the into was cool..your punchlines hit hard an could really go with your flow...good drop man...liked it..keep it up
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Old 09-30-03, 08:52 AM   #4
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Old 09-30-03, 08:56 AM   #5
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Hmm i know the feelin ...

Uppin^^
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Old 09-30-03, 11:14 AM   #6
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damn word perfect once again u spit fire, the flow was on target, u had good vocab and worldplay, i was feelin ur multis and punches, i also thought the content and topic were both original, overall good post, keep it up man.

yo if u have the time can u check out my latest open mic?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8469#post808469
thanx

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Old 09-30-03, 02:52 PM   #7
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Yeah this was a good peice, it was worth the read, your flow was good never got off track, wordplay was good, you had good vocab, your multies were good as well, overall id say this was a good peice, keep dropping..
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Old 09-30-03, 03:34 PM   #8
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well i'd say dis is da best ive seen u spit, never really liked ur other open mics but this was a nice drop


keep em coming


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Old 09-30-03, 07:39 PM   #9
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you may kill my children...but I will fuck yourz...tell ya kidz to watch they ass...in every way possible...lol...but this drop was hot...once again my lyrical twin brova spit that crack...
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Old 10-01-03, 03:19 AM   #10
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UPPIN AND C_ YO POP THIS THE SAME AS ALL MY OTHER SHIT AS FAR AS BATTLE FORMAT
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Old 10-01-03, 05:58 AM   #11
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ill drop, nice intro, tight verse, wordplay was ill,structure was ill,multis were ill, vocab was ill,imagery was ill,over all ill piece, keep droppin tha hotness~!~
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Old 10-01-03, 09:17 AM   #12
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damn that shit was hot....nice intro...flow, wordplay, punches, multies....all hot....really enjoyed reading it...

yo if you ever get a chance peep my latest open mic, i could use some feedback....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81640
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Old 10-01-03, 09:20 AM   #13
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Nice verse but didn't have atheme or nuttin, basically you was jus showin your wordplay, fairplay to ya though




HIT THIS UP

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82645

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Old 10-01-03, 09:32 AM   #14
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IF YOU SAW NO THEME THEN YOU DIDNT READ POP.THE THEME IS REVENGE TO MY HATERS.
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