come on people can you just vote to get this one over with dont let it die shit this is my first battle on this site

aiight the best line s in this were

VA SLIM:striv'n to be famous~want'n to be like mike meyers
but in all reality your just an Austin with no powers
~this was a nice line in my opinion~

OLI dog:but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,
~still a weak line~


use more vocab, an structure, i kno u both newb but ya gotta read other battles an elevate ur styles


my vote:slim


hit this up:but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,

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4 get the last post i though i had copied a link wen i hadnt lol............................................... ...............................

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come on ppl uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................

i think both verses were wack i just liked oli's setup= vote=Oli

look peep, its kinda hard to vote on battles like this (yaya noobs need to up their recs too)

but...........its a real pain even TRYING to read it......

but, ima be da nice guy and not sleep on dis

Slim came harder on this, better flow to it as well

both of u need som SERIOUS ELEVATION!!!!

vote = slim

come on everybody uppin for votes............................................. ..................................

uppin for votes come yall dont sleep on this .................................................. .......................................