no introduction i'll shatter love pieces dancing in naive-ness~
these pansies impregnate lyricial fantasy and that bitch concieved shit~
this is true life a climax of heaven with hell's struggle, leisure's tattles speak~
in untold lies of spies for demise witness a shitless return to reality~

1luv.

honestly i cant really explain what i want to
for a short peice it was well powerful

i think that you would have to have a pretty good insight with you to understand this peice

beause its not something that you can read and go OH YEA I KNO WHAT THEIR talking bout

i cant do that as far as a poem
it was wonderful
as far as understanding the meaning i am clueless

iight

have to agree it was a powerful piece, and it does get you thinking, or it did for me, but since its so short and its one of those pieces that ppl tend to get their on impression of it and its not usualy the one you had when your wrote it, and i might not get what your thinking, but it was still a strong piece, also good vocab and flow

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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