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Old 10-02-03, 01:16 PM   #16
Mr.Christensen
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damn this was long...

aight here are your good points... just about everything
flow was on point, vocab was ILL, the wordplay had me like
wow... hes good!

bad points... i dont like reading 30 lines..and im not featured on this...

i you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=83050
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Old 10-02-03, 06:52 PM   #17
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it wasnt that long
shit...it doesnt take much effort to read 30 lines
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Old 10-03-03, 07:59 AM   #18
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thanks for all the feedback...
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Old 10-03-03, 08:02 AM   #19
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ALot of JIBBER JABBER
NUCCA>>
AHAH WHite kids an there poertry ..nigga go record a song man go rite sum lyrics bitch
or go in a poetic club or sum shit
U weak as i stated before a bunch of jiber jaber Bout 30 lines of it

Rite sumthin worth readin ..dont waist my time wit ya garbage
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Old 10-04-03, 10:58 AM   #20
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kids talkin shit..with nothing to back it up
uses yoda mind tricks to try and ban this herb....
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