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spit like you never spat before

why is there two threads>? and im postin up right after you..........................................

Hazy B Crazy? Fa Sho She Agreed/
To Battle Me Liba, The Realist Femcee/
I Got This Win Wrapped Up Like Presents Under The Tree/
On Christmas Day, You Tickin With A Bomb, Prepare To Be Blown Away/
0-1 Record And You Think You Got Flow? Your A Herb/
I'll Stamp On Your Face Till Your Teeth Go Through The Curb/
Hazy A Crackhead Whore Spat On By Homies/
All The Shit That She Posted Aint Hers, Shes A Phoney/
You Chose To Fuck With The Dee? Well More Fool You/
She's Worse Than The Newbies, This Bitch Just Hasn't A Clue/
About this Game Her Styles Lame, Like A Slut With No Limbs/
Oh Yeah Hazy's Got Arms And Legs..But No Wins/
Your Watsing My Time And The Rest Of RB'S Too/
I'll Have Hazy On One Knee Begging For Votes From You/
Crank Up A Loss On Your Record Of Shame, I'm gone, Feeling Embarrassed Just Speaking Your Name/

Standing tall I’m bout to make this statue FALL lady liba dee...deceased by me=
GURL you quote that you love my pieces…when I read your I think if FECES=

Bitch got BROOKA in her signature—she a straight hooka judging from her AVA picture=
SEE gurl my NAME isn’t CARSON JET and you aint gonna win—ive done won this battle b4 you had the chance to begin=
BEAT by the ink of a pen…got you withdrawin like an insufficient amount of HEROINE=
“HAZY HAZY STOP” you said when we met—face it gurl you even a ‘loser’ on the INTERNET=
copped a feel on me as a rookie…you bout to be baked faster than a TOLLHOUSE cookie=
you’ve got 2 wins and you think you’re a vet…HOW MUCH STUPIDER CAN THIS BITCH GET?=
LIBA undastand it you couldn’t ghost hazy if ya name was Patrick swayze=
Left this bitch in pieces at the thought of her defeat…double homicide convicted when you put this verse on repeat=

uppin for votes y'all and no...'i voted for you so please vote for me' voting,on either side, honesty, let the best battler win. Shit votes like that are just wack.

vote on this.................
don't sleep................

No need to worry Liba, I always vote honest. Here it goes....(I'll do the poll vote after I get over 100 posts)

Hazy B Crazy? Fa Sho She Agreed/
To Battle Me Liba, The Realist Femcee/

^Horrible opener. The opener and closer should always be the strongest part of your verse. It's the first and last impressions you get on your verse....2/10

I Got This Win Wrapped Up Like Presents Under The Tree/
On Christmas Day, You Tickin With A Bomb, Prepare To Be Blown Away/

^Both played concepts...4/10

0-1 Record And You Think You Got Flow? Your A Herb/
I'll Stamp On Your Face Till Your Teeth Go Through The Curb/

^Too simple, and your second line was played out after American History X came out....3/10

Hazy A Crackhead Whore Spat On By Homies/
All The Shit That She Posted Aint Hers, Shes A Phoney/

You gotta start usin wordplay babe. These simple punches aren't gonna win you any battles....4/10

You Chose To Fuck With The Dee? Well More Fool You/
She's Worse Than The Newbies, This Bitch Just Hasn't A Clue/

^Shitty..1/10

About this Game Her Styles Lame, Like A Slut With No Limbs/
Oh Yeah Hazy's Got Arms And Legs..But No Wins/

^First line was kinda bleh...second line was nice...5/10

Your Watsing My Time And The Rest Of RB'S Too/
I'll Have Hazy On One Knee Begging For Votes From You/

^Weak....3/10

Crank Up A Loss On Your Record Of Shame, I'm gone, Feeling Embarrassed Just Speaking Your Name/

^Horrible closer...3/10

I didn't feel that verse at all....little to no wordplay. Flow was choppy and what punches you did have weren't hitting hard at all. You should try and work on that.

Overall....25/80

Standing tall I’m bout to make this statue FALL lady liba dee...deceased by me=

Opener was kinda bleh, definitely stronger than Liba's....4/10

GURL you quote that you love my pieces…when I read your I think if FECES=

Shitty.....2/10

Bitch got BROOKA in her signature—she a straight hooka judging from her AVA picture=

C'mon peeps, I'm waitin for wordplay of some sort. It's not all about flow. No really hard hitting punches in this battle either....4/10

SEE gurl my NAME isn’t CARSON JET and you aint gonna win—ive done won this battle b4 you had the chance to begin=

Eh...5/10

BEAT by the ink of a pen…got you withdrawin like an insufficient amount of HEROINE=

THERE YA GO! At least you're trying to integrate some wordplay here.....6/10

“HAZY HAZY STOP” you said when we met—face it gurl you even a ‘loser’ on the INTERNET=

Bah, back to the weak shit....3/10

copped a feel on me as a rookie…you bout to be baked faster than a TOLLHOUSE cookie=

See, more wordplay, wordplay helps. Played wordplay, but at least you're trying....5/10

you’ve got 2 wins and you think you’re a vet…HOW MUCH STUPIDER CAN THIS BITCH GET?=

Good point, weak punch. Also...it's more stupid :-p....4/10

LIBA undastand it you couldn’t ghost hazy if ya name was Patrick swayze=

Decent punch....7/10

Left this bitch in pieces at the thought of her defeat…double homicide convicted when you put this verse on repeat=

Bad closer...bad, bad closer....4/10

You have some wordplay in your verse. That's good, build on that. Just try not to use played wordplay so much. I mean, I've been gone for over a year and that shit was played back when I was battlin normally. Good rookie battle though....
Overall...44/90

Liba = 31%
Hazy = 49%

Vote ~ Hazy

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i hate it when people sleep on battles, dont you Hazy Girl wherever you are?

please reply people
i will return da favour

I'm sorry...Hazy's total should have been 48/100.....48%..she still gets the vote though................................

aiight i'ma break it down like this:
wordplay:Tie
structure:Liba Dee
personals:Hazy
Punches:Liba Dee
opener:Hazy
finisher:Hazy


fave lines:
LIBA DEE:I Got This Win Wrapped Up Like Presents Under The Tree/
On Christmas Day, You Tickin With A Bomb, Prepare To Be Blown Away/~sick 7/10~

HAZY:BEAT by the ink of a pen…got you withdrawin like an insufficient amount of HEROINE=~ill 7.5/10


This was an ill battle Liba Dee came wit heat, a lotta nice punches.
but i gotta give the win to Hazy for her punches.
this was an ill battle

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an Liba Dee i seen ya other battles an i thought this was ya weakist

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no worries, i'll just try and improve next time, keep voting advice is appriciated.

uppin for votes

damn i left n there was no votes come back and 10 replies

tight
uppin 2-0 tight battle libba .................................................. .............................

fa sho!!! votes peeps nd hazy where yo get those dope pictures! i luv them man, tell me.

dont sleep on this

vote

RESPECT Y'ALL

i think hazy got this hazy's punches hit a lil bit harder to me. but big ups to both of yall keep doin yo thang.

my vote=hazy