Made to a beat Eminem Freestyled in tha studio wit Strach Armstrong for tha DJ

::Intro::
Aiyyo throw on sumthin quik man... Im ready for
this shit... He avoided tha battle... now here's
tha diss... Ur warning nigga...

::music starts::

Yea... Yea... Yea... Yea... Yea...

::flow::
So what tha fucks da deal dats comin though here?
Sound like sum shit thats turnin unfair.../
U think I really care... about ur drama?
I only care about gettin head from yo mama.../
Keepin-It-Gangsta... U hangin out wit a Wanksta
Lil Crane... a.k.a.... Tha R.B. Pranksta.../
Ima lay it down for ya... Dont accept and run
Dats like a gangsta runnin from a battle wit a gun/
Did I scare ya... and make u cry in ur room?
Or was it... That u no..ticed... It was ur doom/
Harsh reality.... Fucked Up Mentality....
Ur weak ass flows lower ur vitality/
I got mad props for dissin ya ass
Dont drop no more... U got no rap class/
U need to study up on ya books in school
Ur like Malibu's Most Wanted... Wannabe cool/
And a wannabe rapper... Ya slackin kid...
U look at my flows and ur jackin kid.../
Man... I dont need all tha time on da track
Cause wastin time on u is like snortin crack/
And they say crack kills and they never lie
Shit, hearin u rap wanna make me die.../
Man... Even tha dead cant be in peace
Unless u stopped rappin or go deceased/
Horrible... cynical lyrical material.... damn....
Ur raps fuck up tha code of tha serial... damn.../
My mic is meltin down from this fired up shit...
So just leave rb and just never spit..../

::Outro::
Damn man... verbal assault in tha 1st degree on this nigga...
Aint no such thing?... Well in my book it is... and im not guilty for this shit...
Holla back...


A flow I had made against Lil Crane. Tha beat was called DR. Knockboots I think (that was its KaZaA name I found it under.) Leave ya feedback. Lataz.

that was good
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So what tha fucks da deal dats comin though here?
Sound like sum shit thats turnin unfair.../
U think I really care... about ur drama?
I only care about gettin head from yo mama.../
Keepin-It-Gangsta... U hangin out wit a Wanksta
Lil Crane... a.k.a.... Tha R.B. Pranksta.../
Ima lay it down for ya... Dont accept and run
Dats like a gangsta runnin from a battle wit a gun/
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i liked those lines
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cynical lyrical material
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that was good too

thanx for tha feedback... Uppin peeps... dont sleep...

straight drop good flow n all ~1~

Yeah this was a pretty good piece, it was a good read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece i thought, your content was good as well was your vocab, overall it was a good piece, keep dropping.

thanx for y'all feedback. Uppin...