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10-07-03, 03:56 PM
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representin hardcore an that peice bro...everything was there...i liekd it all..i would say more but i gotta get goin to my next class...i'll drop summin more wen my comp gets fixed pez
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10-07-03, 04:03 PM
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IP: 548F C165
O yes perfect nice shit I would love to hear this flowen to a beat son!!
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10-07-03, 05:35 PM
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IP: 7EB4 F731
yo i was feelin this flow man....it was dope like it alot.....
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10-07-03, 08:29 PM
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
hot shot like u usual word, holla nigga we neva got to do the collabo u wanted, nvm if u dun want it no mo keep spittin
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10-07-03, 08:41 PM
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IP: 2ED0 C40F
Sorta jus tellin peeps what ur about in this spit,i feel it had the usual wordplay and good vocab as usual,word choice was there and as some have said that the structure was off - it wasn't,with the use of the multies it allows it to flow to a beat even though in text it may look slightly off,in some parts it may have been slightly but didn't look to be,so as a whole liked the peice but in any peice theres little flaws like incorporatin more relevant vocab,but hey no-one on here can do everything perfect.Good shit dawg.
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10-08-03, 03:30 AM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
WEST HELP FIX THAT POP I WOULD LVE HELP
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