MIKE ZOOT- CHESS BUMPING BEAT

(Intro) Its Not what your country can do for you But what you can do for your country

FAXE:

I'm always staying higher that attacks by the Al-Queida/
The jet fuel causing fire and Mohammed was the driver/
Sniper roaming through the deserts of Afganistan/
supporting the attacks when you buying all the contriban/
their main exports inlcude herione and poppy/
i'll kill Bin Laden do a drive by in my jalopee/
don't copy flying planes into our buildings/
you spineless ass bitch your killin women and children/
I'm a take Kabul, Kandahar, and Bagdad/
throw them in a grab bag my flags at half mast/
tourist gassed taking pictures of ground zero/
FDNY has become my new found hero/
forget Dinero but never the date 9-11/
to many innocent people reached the gates of heaven/
i'm a crush the taliban with holes right through their turbans/
and burn their bodies like jews by germans/
stay learning history repeats itslef ask Saddam/
Fuck Iraq, Afganistan and the Taliban/
I said Fuck Iraq, Afganistan and the Taliban/
stay calm/

Verse 2:

you need to watch and listen Bin Laden had a vision/
fuck the al-queida network stay playing your position/
he said he seen it the twin towers collapsing/
in the morning of 9-11 i watched and started gasping/
grasping for some reason behind this description/
started WW 3 us against terrorism/
we'd blow up your buildings but you need some to do so/
Saddam and Bin Laden more homo that manudo/
anthrax and biochemicals might pose a fear/
suicidle martyrs from al-qeuida and al-jazeer/
running through Iraq with special forces tactics/
taking over Bagdad the republican guard is frantic/
panic while we're shooting from apaches/
put Saddam in a raperoom to get fucked by Iraqi's/
your nothing you little pussy ass bastard/
we're gonna shut you down like Dre did to napster/

Verse 3:

Catch me in Um Qasar battling Iraqi's/
fighting for the government but still say fuck Pataki/
Hiding from scuds searching for the anthrax/
the Ba'ath part's shook shaking from attacks/
Saddams prolly hiding scared in his tunnels/
as we throw grenades and missles by the bundles/
Marching on towards the Tigris and Euphrates/
Babylon is gone and Saddam is killin babies/
crawling through the desert where the fucks Bin Laden/
he's prolly in his caves trying to dodge the bombings/
the government is nervous calling for a Jehad/
or suicidal bombers thinking they can see GOD/
Grab an AK Allah Who Acbar/
god is great the days of truth are not far/
i'm sick of all the terrorists acting suicidal/
i'll make them drop the koran and start reading bibles/

I know this is a long piece but please hit me with some feedback
(IT WILL BE IN AUDIO SOON)
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yo it's aight....
the topic is a bit old but still you did well.....
nice flow.....
keep droppin...
peace...

Yeah...this was a alright piece...it flowed pretty well through out the piece though...your content was pretty good...it was structured pretty good i thought too..overall it was a good drop..keep at it..and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84048

uhhh. yea..thanks for that buddy.
i have the news, ok? i know what happened. hahah.
thats an old topic and kind of a
little big for your wigger self, isn't it?
wigger? huh? yea you suck. dont bother
recording that because you and
your mother are the only people who will ever hear it and she wont even like it.
no flow. you suck.
too long. lyrics are stupid and cliched. you suck. wigger wigger. you are a whitey.

HaHaHa you funny little faggot!! IF you feel your shit is the bomb then set up a thread in Front lines and get ya bitch ass ripped. If not then shut you bitch ass up you little fucking 13 year old PC thug

uppin for more critisism----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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i just dislike this topic period... you're just uptight that someone finally gave the US a cocksmackin'.... it's deplorable sure...but im sure the thousands of starving afghanis that were left homeless by the "war on terrorism" really would take this to heart...

besides the rhymes were a little repetitive and shortsighted...

{Peace}

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