her ya go fool.

lets do this, i spit rhymes like 'infiniite'
'equivilent' to the sins i commit
or gonna take place durring the following verse
i can garauntee in the end there will be a hearse or a nurse
to carry you out u was right till this instant
i done it and i did it eat mcees like u in a minute
maybe 5...as long as it takes me to type
or the same amount takes u to fuck dick like michael stipe
make it tight, like the threads in my denim
when bitch like u try to front its simple i just dont let em
i force regression and regret beyond description
im sure ur words so dumb i cant read em like encyrption
so listen, im about teach u a lesson
and for you to even catch one vote ya gonna needs gods blessin
im just testin, practicin my rap phonetics
ya flows pathetic no match for my rap poetics
i said it, im ecstatic and i always spit fantastic
erratic got ya asskicked cuz ya flows are always stagnant
i had it, im bout to ljust augh at it
if rhymes was milk u'd be '*flipped* intolerant lactic'

about to spit

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Havin no pops to mold me just showed me, God didn't plan for another man to controll me - Lake

Isn't it strange how its a fad to bite your idols when the only reason you liked them is cuz they shit wasn't recycled - Aesop Rock

I manipulate the metaphysical power to hold my breath for half an hour continiously breathin' outward-Canibus

FREEDOM IS A ROAD SELDOM TRAVELED BY THE MULTITUDE

Battlin me, you are really livin on the edge
I’ll smack you so hard you die, of a cerebral hemorrage

you’ll never beat me, my rhymes is to clever
this guy cant stop bitin, like he got a involuntary jaw tremor

look at his verse, is he battlin or givin "constructive criticism"
only way you catch a case is for practicin plagurism

I used to piss on rappers now I took a brake to brake one
speakin of pissin since I fucked your mom I cant take one

dont get this confused wit just rap cuz I’ll hunt you down and beat you dead
this fool copies from somewhere so he prolly dont understand WTF he said

I’m not like you, aint copin, these are my rhymes
from the way this battle ends its like god blessed me 5 times(see one of his punches)

this is what happens if you undermine my lines
I redifine your anatomy wit a couple of bars or a couple of nines

this battle not even close
its obvious you pre-write, no one has they verse on the first post

I knock you on your face, make you nose dive
you couldnt KO me if I bummed you the 5

right here its the end for wackness you should be banned
your rhymes I dont comprehend, I guess parents just dont understand

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Havin no pops to mold me just showed me, God didn't plan for another man to controll me - Lake

Isn't it strange how its a fad to bite your idols when the only reason you liked them is cuz they shit wasn't recycled - Aesop Rock

I manipulate the metaphysical power to hold my breath for half an hour continiously breathin' outward-Canibus

FREEDOM IS A ROAD SELDOM TRAVELED BY THE MULTITUDE

uppin....

but shit fool i dotn prewrite or copy wha tu talkin about man

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yo yo. uppin......im really wondering why nobody ever votes or posts in this damn forum...or even almost the whole site. i thought this shit was tight but it would be way cooler if ppl actually cared about battles besides their own.

votes'll come


flow-jego
punches-target
originality-jego
enjoment for me-jego...cuz the flow
wordplay-target
personals-none

vote-jego....flow and originality won it..cuz dude played off his verse

tuff did play off his verse a little but jego's spit was weak, where are the punches at? Atleast tuff had a couple personals that hit and a better flow. vote=tuff

peep my battles out in the sig atleast one. please thanx

holla

tuff a newbie but spittin hard like a real vet

flow=tuff
punches=tuff
wordplay=jego
vocab=jego
overal=tuff...i gotta hand it to ya that was a funny lil verse and shit fo sho

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uppppppppppppppppppin this yo......
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.....................lets get some votes

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Havin no pops to mold me just showed me, God didn't plan for another man to controll me - Lake

Isn't it strange how its a fad to bite your idols when the only reason you liked them is cuz they shit wasn't recycled - Aesop Rock

I manipulate the metaphysical power to hold my breath for half an hour continiously breathin' outward-Canibus

FREEDOM IS A ROAD SELDOM TRAVELED BY THE MULTITUDE

uppin. vote dudes. thats how this site works.

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i vote tuff...i felt his verse more, and i thought he had better flow and played along quite well. he/she had nice punches, although da other dude had a bit better vocab...nice battle thought..pretty close
vote = tuff

peace

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Tuff's was pretty funny, and it wasn't as boring as jego's. ..............................
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Vote=Tuff

flow-jego
punches-TT
originality-jego
wordplay-TT
personals-none
structure:TT



nicee battle

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