Aiight, since I set it up, you spit first. In your rules you said you'd set.

Rules:

20 Lines Max
No Crew/Dick Ridin/Etc. votes
Have until 8 P.M. East to get verses up.


Go 'head

k....in....the rules were i set up u spit first...blind spits...by 8 payce
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Ill Give You Probable Effects-And-Cause, Like "Dead Soldier Statistics" This "Casualty-Loss" (Lost)..
You Couldent "Hold Up The Game" If You Proceeded To Play-N-Pause!..
Im Hungury, The Predator But Formula Like 'No WWF' Enough-Raw..
Formulas "Limbs" Will Be Like "Bootleg Hustlers Customers" Will Be "Ripped Off" !!
Swiftly Ill Clip Your Pussy-Grip(Fingerin Ya Self), And Have Ya Like "New Wripleys" Ya Gums-Sticked...
You Could "Eat Cement" And Still Not Put Out "Hard Shit" !!
Karat Leaves-Him-Broken, How Could He Spit Hard If Hes "Soft Spoken" ?
Watch Out Cus Like "Garfield Killin Himself" This Kats-Choken!!

ehh ....

Man fuck, my fault. I got caught up in some family shit. I'll have my verse in 10 min.
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Check it.

24, might as well call Cash Money for the dick-ride
Ya 'ass hungry', hopin that votes will 'cum' tonight
(ass hungry- meant to mean he wants men's ass)

Reborn?, My lines will morph to nines, he's dead again
It's a crime, for me to read your rhymes and realize it's been 'said again'

I've heard it all before, and it still don't phase me
Like 'retards trying to spell Battle', i'm driving you crazy!

Seriously, if any body will proceed to choke, it's you Karat
Ya can't 'bear-it', so you dress up for Halloween so you won't be embarassed

Formula's got the chalk to outline you, pick-your-pose
24's out like he came in, wit his clit exposed!

Blood from nose, he tells he's boys he got some crack
But that was a punch, face-to-the-books, and he won't accept facts
(Face-the-facts)

Problem is: You claim to be real but you're really a pawn
Those lines were for me?, BSing, that's really a song
(Claim to be real (24 KT), Pawn (Most gold at Pawn shops are fake]}

I bet you was hopin I wouldn't spit, so you could get your 1st win
Truth: You're lucky I gave you the time so you could get your first spin
(Battling me = him gettin credibility)

The Finisher:

You can't knock-me, Reborn wastes this on-slaught
My fault, but you Copy N Paste, you finally got caught


God damn i've been fallin off on battles. Nice Verse 24.

Vote=24

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multies-24
personals-Formula
Vocab-24
Metas-24

Nice shit 24, try to make ur lines flow better thow, nice multies I liked ya shit

Payce

Even tho ya cant vote hit this up wit feedback

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84295

yo nice verses both of you
but i think formula took it he had a nice beat all the way through
the dicision wasnt easy though

any way vote goes to formula

yo i would appreciate it if you would check out this battle and give an honest vote plz thnx:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84188

although you cant vote jus give some coments and shit
thnx ..............D
again nice verses both of you

UpPiNNNNNN... 1-1, Votes plz. No Sleep.

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24 won this, Formula came pretty basic, and Karat just dropped better punchlines on em....But both verses were mediocre And bothe MC's need to Elevate

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Vote = 24

i was feelin formulas flow, but 24's punches were harder i thought----flow culd of been hotter but the harder punches win battles anyway---and his were more thought out------vote=24

peep my battles in the sig----still tryin to ge to 100 posts not quite there yet-------111111

This is what i think...
Flow =formula
Punches =24
Originality = 24

Overall Vote= 24

Yo hit up this link n vote on it... post your links n we will do the same...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84008

Originally posted by Formula
UpPiNNNNNN... 1-1, Votes plz. No Sleep.

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