we were faffin about,havin some fun and i came up with (no heart put in it) this lil piece.....Lookin fwd to hearin allot of contradictions cuz i know its comin....

Dont be thinkin its a good piece cuz we were usin topics thats going on at the mo...Like the Premiership Rape Scandal, or Ian Duncan Smiths rise to terminating..!!!

pumped up like muscle,you got an actor to run ya state//
grown up around allot of hustle,now ur regions dealt with fate//
the gates of un-achievnes will shortly open for one man only//
a one man army with faces to hide behind who likes to call himself Arnie//
its so envious how imigrated folks can run percenteges of countrys//
yall got an endevoures ride ahead,predictions.?, kinda bumpy//
so what's his goals he bares in mind to keep a single voter pleased?//
you will find that hes behind and used his skill to get u teased//
a molecular kind of re-union,a man in power who admires hitler//
his spectaculor ways of de-munio with a history layed so bitter//
yes hes sinned before his fame, bill clinton even smoked weed//
but diffirence is he grew up planned to run U.S in deed//
so whats the trials and tribulations planned for mr shwarznegger//
maybe to stop the war with comunication that holds his mind and makes him eager//
hes ready to what?, repp his state, he little traitor cudnt love his home//
so he changes and moves to Cali, dusnt like it and so he moanes//
i think thats rong, so very stupid, and certainly not on//
if i was brought up loving Cali,id tell arnie to go where he came from//

this was funny as hell man
flow and wordplay were on point

hes ready to what?, repp his state, he little traitor cudnt love his home//
so he changes and moves to Cali, dusnt like it and so he moanes//

loved that part
great drop kid...
if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=84159

lol...thanx man....im peepin urs now....

yeah, bout that line...i mean, if u wana be Governer, it means u think it needs change....hence the moaning..!!!

any more feed back fellas..??

Yeah i agree...this was good lol...it flowed very well through out it i thought, didnt fall off at all really....your wordplay was nice as well...vocab was good too i thought....structure was good too...and i liked the way you ended it....overall it was a good drop...keep dropping.

funny ass piece nigga. on the rap side of things i was feelin this wit some nice vocab and some nice punchlines.

big ups nigga
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holla at yo boi
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one word, THROWED, arnolds gonna make a good governor i bet, and u gotta be stupid to believe every little lie tha press comes up wit, but thats my point on tha message, tha flow was mderate, aiight vocab, aight wordplay, tha structure was aiight, your rhyme scheme was off point, and you stayed on point with your story, all in all rap wise 7 out 10, political wise(if it mattered)3 out of 20.very naive message not seein you was beein real but what ever. all in all average drop, keep spittin and elevatin.~1~

yo man...dont be a dick.......(FUCKIN HERB, HE DONT KNOW WHO I AM..LOL)

anyway....did ya read the begginin...were i sed it was just a topic.....I think its great Arnie's govener..!!! I waish him all the best..!!! damn man.....u on the blob os sumthin..!!!

anyway....more oppinions..!!!

Yup i agree on the funny-ness this piece contained,...

It was real nice concept u were usin, combined wit a nice flow,..

the gates of un-achievnes will shortly open for one man only//
a one man army with faces to hide behind who likes to call himself Arnie// Rofl

U stayed well on-topic,...and this was an enjoyable piece.

Pz

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this was funny as hell man
flow and wordplay were on point

realist said it right yo i need to read more from you ...you got hell of skill.

thanx man....i was tryin to get a laugh out of it....cuz i really do think hes the right man for the job..!!!

i cuda done that small fella (fergot his name), but theres more laughs outa Arnie..1!!

Aight...i got a "deppresin" topic in my college bag...i wrote it yesterday...ill post it up now...(it was a practice verse, nuthin special)

holla..!!

thanx man

funny shit ez................................................ .......good shit, very amusin............................................ ......................................... enjoyed it

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replied already ^^
just dropping a link and upping
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636