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i'll break it down

Flow Eye
Vocab Mentally
Structure Eye
Multies Mentally
Enjoyability Eye
Punches Eye

close battle but i'm gonna go with eye on this one for a better verse in most catergories

Close one here...

Kursed came with a few played concepts...
Eye had a pretty nice flow..
Pucnhes were decent...

Vote- Eye...

Peep my merking against dw...
lmao

Pretty good battle here....Breakdown

Punches: Eye
Flow: Eye
Metas: Tie
Wordplay: None
Multis: Eye
Personals: MK

Vote = Eye

He Just had the overall better verse..MK u need to change ya structure up and try to shorten them bars pimpin...

upppin like a wonderbra!
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Mentally HopeIn He Words Got Me Shook And Concerned
Supposedly Kursed But Even Your Avy Looks Like A Nerd
*LOL , GOOD PUNCH , FUNNY ASS SHIT 8.5/10
You Cleanin Out Ya Closet, Bitch I Be Keyin' Up Ya Face Lift
Sayin You Lethargic Wit Ya "Key" Would Be An Understatement
*NICE LINE , NICE RYTHMES , CLEVER SHIT 8/10
"It's" Gibberish, Funny You Try'ta Be Hot When You Deliver It
Forget It Kid, Work Domino's If You Want Heat Wave Privaleges
*LOL , ANOTHER GEM , YOUR ON ROLL KID 8.5/10
Ignorant, This Bitch Mental Dope? Peeps Dont Even Consider It
Merkin Shit?, You Not On My Page Givin It, Your Livin In The Bitch
*AIIGHT SLOWED DOWN A LITTLE , STILL DECENT VERSE 7/10
Spit It Belligerent, No1's Stoppin Me, You Aint Holdin Shots Ta Me
Killer Spit, My Punches Got Ya Hed Spinnin Like Moldin Pottery
*NICE LINE , DECENT CLOSE , NICE MULTIES AND FLOW 8/10

40/50 80%





Leavin you "dead on arrival" like premature babies born wit distorted lungs//
"Torture your mouth" like a esophagus drowned in saliva and hung from a tongue//
*AIGGHT , LIKE IT BETTER 2ND TIME I READ IT , CLEVER SHIT 8/10

Collapse your life like disabled lungs, rip your veins out until no blood remains//
Infill red dot aimed to split ya thoughts and shatter your brain splittin your crane//

*LUNGS AGAIN ? , AIGHT LINE GOOD FLOW , KINDA PLAYED RYTHMES 7/10
You get "whats cumin to you" like playmates in bed, raped in a thread//
Like Sean Paul, watch these bullets stick to your brain like glue leavin you dead//
*NICE RYTHME , GOOD WORDPLAY , TOP HALF WAS BETTER 8/10

Saliva cloggin your windpipe, like drownin in spit, you choked//
Punches leave your jaw like a Tampon period, bloody and swollen, then broke//
*PLAYED OUT , SIMILAR TO YUR 1ST LINE , LOL AT BOTTOM HALF 7/10

Ill pass you a L to the left of your seven makin you meet the number two//
Duckin like your crew leader bein called out for slips, not comin through//
*GOOD PUNCH , HEAVY , DECENT OVERALL , NICE FLOW 8/10

TOTAL 40/50 80 %


TIE
However , since it took 3 days to write this ........................... Imma Have to go with Eyes

no beef , close battle , peace to both

ce

ONCE AGAIN , WONT LET ME POLL VOTE , I APOLOGIZE ........

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its cool dawg...................uppn this jawn.......
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thanx fo feedback...and a nice explained
vote.

jesus christ.............i didnt know this battle was A Serta......
stop bullshittin and sleepin
lets get some votes here.
uppn./\

Aight battle, but I think that Eye got this...he just had better shit...mentally kursed, your shit was aight...but you always talk about ripping out their guts, cutting their head off...you had some good wordplay, but eye had the wordplay AND the flow...

VOTE=EYE4NEYE

BREAKDOWNuh duh duh...(suspenseful muzik comez on)

structure-Eye
flow-both
personalz-Mentally
punchez-Eye
enjoyability-Eye
muttiez-Eye
overall-Eye

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MK became too repetitive in his verse, talkin about windpipes and lungs 1 too many times

and the disses didnt hit that hard

Eye slacked off in some parts but his disses came out hotter

Flow = Eye
Punches = Eye
Structure = Eye
Creativity = MK
Wordplay = MK

Vote = Eye

hit this battle up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85442

werd i think eye got this 1 also.......

mentally....u came decent homie...but........

definitly not ur best......i just felt that eye.........

came wit harder hitting punches...and......

better usage of wordplay.....so my vote........

goes to...EYE4NEYE......

good battle..stay up....

yep..
pz....