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Abandoned
Alone Motionless thoughts, couldnt Continue, the Reason I Fought, is To Die by your Side, held Pressure on you to Rely, Minds Caught. We Collided Often, a Pillowed Atmosphere where pain was Soften, spoke as One a Unisen, our Temple was a Notebook, we Taught In. Couldnt be Excused of the Iggnorant or Confused. . Youth of Today, Words consisted of Life & Meaning not the time and when of payday. I Listened, Deep Attention into the Meaning of every Spoken Truth, im Lost with out you, Hate is Compounded not sure on what To Do. Not Used to Feeling the Pressence of a Baron Room, No More Us, & when Anger & Rage, Tore its Cage, Escaping Fate, I cant Discuss. Doings of Wrong, Haywired Emotions that couldnt possibly be shaked, why Couldnt I just Fade away with You, thats the only Made Mistake. Throw my Pencil down, No use anymore, None will Bother To Listen, Notebook Paper Torn & Devoured by the Fire, the Sparks begin Glisten. Hurt the Most by You, no Stability to Stand Through or even get Bye, so I Swallowed my Pride and Stopped Breathing, Hip Hop Had Died. . . - Faze |
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Uppin. .
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it was ok, i wasnt realy feelin it though, vocab was good but flow could use work
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I've dropped many of pieces along the same lines as this.. probably because most adolesences feel this
Or spell as bad as me.. lol But the whole piece was constructed really well and I was feeling all your lines.. Props Good rep for the fam ![]() |
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