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I'd post links but you all know I've voted on over 3 battles.
He spits first.
No feeding......


Consider this the check in....

Checkin in....

Verse will be done in a bit..

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Unearth catilidge from his skin,broken bones run through, twist his words till I win/
Defient when he accpeted, never suspected a rap god lies in me, resurrected/
Cock whore, mouth open wide as a door, got herpes from fuckin on a bathroom flr./
Bitch fuck you and your skills, poppin pills for testing, make hair fallout to pay bills/
Incrusted in a crevice of infactualization, turned 10 and went in prostitue inmates in/
Forskin peeling on your brain, pndering ways to beat me, mind starting to strain/
Whoa, no, look, another homo, want me to call you a homo-hobo in slo-mo ho?/
Restate your former confession, you bit off vannial ice in your first rap session/
Chirt got girls with looseness to boot, fuck loosness, they got air hangers to boot/
Rip your spine through your ass, competeing for this medal got you placeing last/

Im just getting back into it, that was alright, so good luck Chrit. Oh and I enver no show.

Blah...

Keystyle coming...
As always...

Leaving for a month? Still here? You just wont die right...
By more than a hair...
...I'll win this fight cause you're spit completely lacked highlights...
Punk bitch... you come so wack I was expecting a *Style Switch!*
Enjoy it while your here...
...about to be locked out from elite, never appearing on the ill list
Face down after this battle... Like Zimmer rushing Red Sox...
Punches rock ya neck... Leave the shit emulating pop rocks...
I'm glad to see ya only text... For that fact thank god!!!
Cause with your skill I'd hear a track and rip out my soundcard...
Not a free agent by choice but from lack of talent and the fact ya wack...
Hell you even got turned down... When Compton Records made a comeback

i dont think i can vote cause im not elite
flow - locke..chrit was off a few time
mulits - both were ok
punches - chrit
wordplay - locke...the highlight line was blah
overall - chrit
vote- chrit

but goog job locke, you came hard

Not a battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

LOL FIRST OFF LEMME JUST TELL realist that those ARENOT!!!! multis in your sig you're highlightin I hope u dont think they are.

But this battle was easily chrit, let locke not come back to elite until he elevates. This was rediculous. like he was freestylin on the block, no offense.

vote - chrit

Edited: for some reason I cant poll vote, Chrit could u fix this and PM The End about it? thanx, peace

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

Punches-Chrit
Flow-Locke
Complexity-Chrit
Metas-Chrit

Overall this was a closer battle than the breakdown shows but chrit came hard on this.. Props

Vote-Chrit

Locke
Unearth catilidge from his skin,broken bones run through, twist his words till I win/

^^decent..played though
Defient when he accpeted, never suspected a rap god lies in me, resurrected/

^^wack
C
ock whore, mouth open wide as a door, got herpes from fuckin on a bathroom flr./

^^cmon man...this is weak as hell..

Bitch fuck you and your skills, poppin pills for testing, make hair fallout to pay bills/

^^ok....punch?
Incrusted in a crevice of infactualization, turned 10 and went in prostitue inmates in/

^^this was decent, but too much repitition.

Forskin peeling on your brain, pndering ways to beat me, mind starting to strain/
Whoa, no, look, another homo, want me to call you a homo-hobo in slo-mo ho?/

^^um......no....flow was nice punch lacking
Restate your former confession, you bit off vannial ice in your first rap session/

^^cut your bars down, this should be made into one line with multis and another line with the same flow.....
Chirt got girls with looseness to boot, fuck loosness, they got air hangers to boot/

^^too much repitition..horrible flow
Rip your spine through your ass, competeing for this medal got you placeing last/

^^ok finisher

Overall-4/10

Chrit-
Leaving for a month? Still here? You just wont die right...
By more than a hair...
...I'll win this fight cause you're spit completely lacked highlights...

^^funny opener...but weak
Punk bitch... you come so wack I was expecting a *Style Switch!*
Enjoy it while your here...
...about to be locked out from elite, never appearing on the ill list

^^lol..this was nice..

Face down after this battle... Like Zimmer rushing Red Sox...
Punches rock ya neck... Leave the shit emulating pop rocks...

^^choppy flow..didn't like this bar

I'm glad to see ya only text... For that fact thank god!!!
Cause with your skill I'd hear a track and rip out my soundcard...

^^nice, solid punch

Not a free agent by choice but from lack of talent and the fact ya wack...
Hell you even got turned down... When Compton Records made a comeback

^^ok finisher...

Overall-decent verse...although I've seen much beter from you...good enough to win...6/10

Vote=chrit

This is exacly what I wanted, you can't get good adivce from some people, you get the best in here to vote on battles with Chirt, even know I probly lost, thanks for the battle Chrit.

Explain that better, play off of my own lines, and tie them together? Explain it better, it's to early in the morning.

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