I wrote this in my MATHS lesson in college, And the lecturer is a DICK, so i thought of a topic....... TA-DAAAAA----------> This is the result...??



A Game between two titans,On boards of black and white//
Their turn may take a lifetime,Hopeing moves are perfectly rite//
A fight of mental instigation,will challenge a way of knowledge//
A sport thats played by many people,who attend at my small college//
The death of royalty is achieved,By moves that may just stun//
a death completed by ones sleaze,is done without the use of guns//
But need not worry bout a life,since dying is imitated//
by the tactics of someone clever,who claims hes never played it//
Religion has a hold on what beholds to be the winning pass//
Four Bishops have a rule that only fools may think of last//
Theres barely any members left to participate anymore//
On the board theres seven pieces,Both players engage in war//
The king is left to futher suffer,surronded,no-where ells to go//
Does he pleed to see his mother?,The answer to this is no//
A winer stated hours later, In a game thats ran by logic//
But the rythm is further greater,Somewhat chilled and so melodic//

Hope U liked it..!!

this is pretty fucken tight...........i like the content and delivery over all a good drop

***BOY WHAT YOU DOIN WRITTEN RHYMES IN MATH CLASS IN COLLEGE, PAY YO AZZ ATTENTION AND LEARN SOMETHIN FOR ONCE!!!!!??????*****

^^^HAHAHA sounds like somethin my mom dukes would say to me...lol

anyways this was a hot drop 4real. The content was koo, vocab was good and the topic was tiight too. Nice peice, just wish it was a bit longer tho nah mean. But its still a good drop, keep it up, 1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

ANy more oppinions bros........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


lol...and thanx........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ayo that was a nice dropped, had good vocab, nice topic, flow was a lil off but that can be inproved wit practice, overall it was a tight ass topic, and a good ass drop, the flow was suspect but this aint audio so its not too big a deal


Payce

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lol.........thanx man..!!

If i said this sucked.. Would you still go and give props for my work? I hope so.. Even if i said this was good.. Would you go and say truthfully what you thought of my work?.. Well i hope you'll critique honestly like I have

This had a good vocab with a solid flow and I liked the content and everyline related to the topic.. I understand this was done out of boredom and you actually turned it round to be original.. The topic was defintely unusual which was great..

Theres barely any members left to participate anymore//
On the board theres seven pieces,Both players engage in war//

thats my favourite line.. Pz

very tight piece, vocab was on point, creativity was tight, it was laid out well, imagery was ill, all in all i thought this piece was tight,keep elevatin and droppin.~1~

nice shit i was feelin it. nice vocab flow and especially word play. this was nice as hell. keep writin nigga.

my favorite line

A fight of mental instigation,will challenge a way of knowledge//
A sport thats played by many people,who attend at my small college//

^^^nice line right there

holla

from what you wrote you sound like one smart mother fucka. Math aint going good for you though it sounds like, so I guess you should stick to writing


your peace was dope though. nice dropps and punch lines



the reaper

weird but its ight