Hey Fellas..& Of Course Girlies I'm Undertaking A Really Crazy English Course This Year And Have To Write Some Poetry For My Major Works..Alot Of My Rhyming Is Highly Hip-Hop Influenced As I'm Only Really Audio Nowadays But I'm Working On Touching The Poetic Feel Of Things..So I'll Just Drop On Somethin...Please Enjoy...

Rain Will Never Fall Upon These Shores For They Are Wealthy...
Mother Nature's Cards Are Worthy, Why Has She Not Dealt The?
A More Deserving Section Segregated From The Gold...
Yearns For The Earning Of A Hand That One Could Not Mould..
Not Mortal Creation, Search For Higher Beings Is Preference..
Yet Why Rely On Religion If We All Search For Independence?..
They Pray For Blessing And That It Is Words, Not Years In Sentence..
Events Of Evidence, Portraying Faith, In Prayers Own Depiction..
Tables Turn In Vengeance, One's Success Is One's Infliction..
The Faithful Rewarded In Gods Shower Of Praise..
The Drought Broken For The Less Fortunate Faithfuls, Greener Grass To Raise..

If You Do Not Understand This, Just Drop Your Thoughts On This And What You Took From It And I Will Break It All Down For You..Thankyou For Reading..Pz..

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Not sure if I understnad it, im guessing its about God's reward for life after death? if not then good poem anyways.. I havent started english yet (this year) but ill prolly be doin poems like that too

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Well orikle. Though i felt you put too much 'pressure' on the rhyme scene. In another way it had it's own charms.

I liked the gentle imagery. It wasn't intense. Yet as you carried on through the piece. It built up into some fairly powerful.

It seemed to be about the greedy (and usually rich?) not being rewarded by god. Whilst the poor, who work honestly and with litle greeed. Get rewarded.

Or maybe not rewarded as such. But a matter of the rich n greedy live on hollow grounds. Little love. Whilst the poor, well you get th epoint.

Of course, the rich/poor thing could be of the soul. Intertwining the 'physical' state of richness with the inner 'spiritual' one. Er...

I didn't disect the piece as such. Went with the flow. And so therefore the meaning i got is a bit hazy.

Nice piece.

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"Though i felt you put too much 'pressure' on the rhyme scene" I dunno what you meant there man..but yeah thanx for the replies..Yeah the poem is just talking about God rewarding a faithful community in breaking their drought whilst he does not worry about the Rich people..Other sentences have different meanings in regards to other aspects such as the Independence..and the prayer and all so yeah..Its that and whatever else you can take out of it..thankyou..Pz..

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