~ Over The Edge ~

Sirens Screaming, Blurred Water Colored Graphics..
Missed The Talk, Grasped The Actions.. In The Time It Lasted..
What Had Happened? Common Sense Not Fitting The Dream..
Whats It Mean? Bloodied Dry Walls.. N' Him In The Scene..

(He Awoke!)
Quarter Past 2, Shakin His Thoughts From His Mind..
With Work At Nine.. Left His Thoughts Un-Defined..
He Slept It Off.. Not Thinking Much Of It..
Throbbing Hit His Head, Twists In His Stomach..
Sick, Never Quick w/ Assumptions..So He Made It..
Met w/ An Aqquantice, He Dreadfully Hated..
Fake Conversations Demonstrated Their Hatred..
Fights Instigated.. Nothing, But Never Mistaken..
Tension Breakin, Snickers Back w/ Monotone Enthusiasm..
Used It As An Advantage.. To Get Back At Him..
A Remark, A Look In Motions When They Creep Fast..
Secret Burn.. From A Belated Deep Past..
Believed Rash, Against His Once Friend..
Time N' Time Again.. Never To See Its Misleading End..

((Night After))

The Sirens Were Clearer, Made Sense Of The Graphics..
Got A Little Talk.. Re-Lived The Actions.. In The 2 Hours It Lasted..
What Had Happened? Common Sense Still Not Fitting The Dream..
Whats It Mean? Bloodied Dry Walls..w/ His Co-Worker Also In The Scene..

(He Awoke!)
This Time Getting Up.. Not Gunn Try Forgetting It..
Never Mentioned It, Just Wondered What His Mind Had Ventured In..
Whats The Image? Where Was It ?..
So Close, Yet His Mind Took It From Him..
The Day Went On.. Couldn't Make The Math..
He Sat.. Until The Man He Hated Crossed His Path..
He Laughed.. Just To Get On His Case..
Never Got Physical.. Till The Man Spit In His Face..
In Haste.. He Acted w/ His Mind Under His Fists..
He Missed.. N' Got Stabbed In His Ribs..
Bleeding.. In The Subway Station Alone..
Reached For His Phone.. But His Wife Wasn't Home..
Got Sum Treatment.. Okay.. But It Wasn't Done..
Grabbed His Gun.. Anger High.. Calm Was None..
Kicked The Man's Door Open Wide..
Seen Him Inside.. Delivered Pain Un-Mortified..
Arguments Evoked.. Hatred Provoked..
Said The Most.. With Hands Choked At His Throat..
He Pushed Him Off.. And Watched Him Fall..
Shot 3 Rounds Of The Gun.. Blood Stained Dry Walls..
Then Saw.. The Sirens Blare.. Yards Away..
Too Far To Say.. Distracted.. N' Hit Hard This Way..
Lead In His Flesh, Ahead Of His Chest..
Said His Regrets.. Then Fled Wit Whats Left..
Resolved What He Was Plottin..
Blood Clottin.. From The Arterie He Was Shot In..
Wished He Stopped It.. As He Was Apprehended..
The Man He Be-Friended.. And Thats Where It Ended..

The Sirens In His Face.. Witnessed The Graphics..
Talked The Talk.. Did The Actions, In The 2 Hours It Lasted..
It Had Happened.. Common Sense Didn't Make Up The Dream..
Found The Mean.. With Himself And The Man.. In The Same Scene


Friends.. Grown To Hate Eachother..
Lost The Reason.............................They Were Brothers..



A Parent.. Who Gave Nothing And Sold Her Kids..
He Was On The Edge..Just Needed Sumone To Push Him Over It

Uhh Anyone ?

pretty sick shit nigga - tight flow vocab was pretty nice
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this was some nice shit nigga. i was really feelin the topic, it looks like u put some time into it. your flow was sweet i was feelin the vocab and the wordplay. you had a tight rhyme scheme as well. nice flow nigga

my favorite lines

Arguments Evoked.. Hatred Provoked..
Said The Most.. With Hands Choked At His Throat..
He Pushed Him Off.. And Watched Him Fall..
Shot 3 Rounds Of The Gun.. Blood Stained Dry Walls..


hot shit nigga

holla

Nice, ,...

Topic original, .....u stayed well on it ,...

Flow was nice, ...kept it niceley to geghter ...

Props

And check ur pm...

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Damn dont u hate that Sleepers......^^

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