new song.............

jsut some fuckin around shit............

basically im just rappin about my normal day...........




peep and leave feedback please.....



pz..........


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typing as im listening
beat is nice and laid back.
dilvery is good.
lyrical content pretty good.
hook is reall nice.
it reminds me of the early 90s type chill at a bbq track.
nicenice.
one problem i could see need to make your vocals a little louder.
cause your kinda in the back ground but besides that good drop.

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same as phylo said. Turn your vocals up over the track. Everything else was cool tho. Nice track

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lmao this songs dope, its on some People Under the Stairs shit . . .


first verse was straight

second verse, dope

third verse, off the chain son

chorus, sick



In the first verse your vocals were really low and hard to hear. It was cool but the delivery seemed sorta strained. The second verse was tight as hell, dope lines, betta delivery. Third verse was my favorite. Its the best I heard u flow before. You dont seem tense like some of your older shit. Sounds like you just chillin, bein one with the beat. Wyla, "Dawg you got some skills" "Truuee" LMAO. sick. dope drop. sickiness.

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yea i was fealing this,laid back type chilling cruiseing in the whip gettin smoked out track,,voice need to be a little louder..
and i see you used that warren g beat from back in the dayz..
overall good drop son..peace

thats for tha feedback yall.....

greatly appreciated................


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pz.....

listenin to beat, damn, I feel like goin outside and throwin a family reunion to this track, get the grill goin. cookin some bbq chicken namean

verse 1- starts out really nice, laid back. explainin how the day goes, very nice. movin like a fair fight, keep the hits equal<<<word
I like how you use delivery, old school style. the structure and all the laid backness

chorus really laid back, love it

2nd verse-lmao when you do the "whoo" you sound like will smith, only thing. but it's crazy I'm lovin it like mc donalds

3rd verse-this shits tight as fuck I"m just meltin to the track now, and this outro's pretty nice to

well that's it, *kiss on the cheek*, you got my number, make sure to call me

listenin to beat, damn, I feel like goin outside and throwin a family reunion to this track, get the grill goin. cookin some bbq chicken namean

verse 1- starts out really nice, laid back. explainin how the day goes, very nice. movin like a fair fight, keep the hits equal<<<word
I like how you use delivery, old school style. the structure and all the laid backness

chorus really laid back, love it

2nd verse-lmao when you do the "whoo" you sound like will smith, only thing. but it's crazy I'm lovin it like mc donalds

3rd verse-this shits tight as fuck I"m just meltin to the track now, and this outro's pretty nice to

I realize your vocals are low, but I'm sure that's just cuz of the lo-fi. I bet it's just fine if you d/l it.

5/5-you did everything perfect for this beat, the style, delivery, lyrics, nice wordplay and shit. feelin it. som'm to do in your ride. reminds me of some tupac/snoop/dre shit in their goood days. very nice, i'm a play this to my boy, he loves old school, I'll hit you up with his feedback later

well that's it, *kiss on the cheek*, you got my number, make sure to call me

^^^^^^^^^^^^thanks fred..........appreciate your feedback......






damn i didnt htink this many peeps would reply.....

why stop......

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pz......

*listening again*

lol you sound like Aesop when the tracks starts and u say "aiyyo" . . .

chorus=dope "Rockin in St. Petersburg"

lmao, you do sound like will smith when u say "whoo" lmfao

"you can find me on a playground" lol


3rd verse = sickness


"Like geeks always online, my shot is nothin but net" sick, I missed that b4


I need sleep . . . .

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thanks dude^^^^^^^^


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1st Verse Wasn't Bad..You Got That Mad Voice For Laid Back Chillin Tracks..Hook Was iLL..Fuck!..2nd Verse Dropped In With Heat Man..Follows Through To The Next Hook haha Yeah werd to the WOO! haha..3rd is iLL as fuck too man...I was suprised I Must admit for real..this was tight mate..Big Props &..Pz..

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much appreciated....................

*shakes head* i cant belive that whoo.....sounds like will smith....


but it does lmao........