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10-20-03, 11:35 AM
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Acceptations.. ClaustrophobicS / RoA Collab
IP: FF40 570D
Acceptations
Edicus/ThugzDoCry Ft. Potent.. Edicius / ThugzDoCry...! The true desire,reachin out for acceptations, puttin a stop to dumb radical,.hummiliations. Effective,words bombin my system,and now?, shud i strongly resist,or act just like a pawn wow. Lookin at the world as a game off... chess, people tryin to arrange it, but still a mess. People, praisin me, ..with a sarcastic, caugh, equally desturbin my complicated. thoughts. Unstabillitys,..destroyin aspects of my foundations, but all i want is,it so bad? wantin some acceptations. The world jus a place were we all shud live up to exceptations? but one thing we share we all want and look out for the acceptations. Potent If I can't get accepted by your lot then i'll accept death Never a natural born looser cuz i'll be rejected the best Elected to be depressed..I'll cut & show inside your chest You've no heart!! Making a fragile person deprart crowds Being expelled from groups made me rebel & start rows Your sharks on the prowl..All eating me alive when i cried Got me thinking there's no one who can help me survive Just a deprived child.. But we all know that they succeed If you can belive..Then you can build an empire to be free Of the infection & correlatings rejections & hating. All rights reserverd 2003/2004 , Copyright © ClaustrophobicS™ / RoA™ Inc.
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10-20-03, 12:17 PM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
THIS WAS ILL AS FUCK POTIENT CAME OUT MOST UT EVERY ELEMENT WAS HERE.STAY UP FOR REALZ
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10-20-03, 12:26 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
What ?
Dont rush replys man , ...i dont get u, ...be little specific..
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10-20-03, 03:14 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Up^
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10-20-03, 03:42 PM
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IP: 96FF 1751
ill piece, structure was good, rhyme scheme was off for tha first verse, i think potient was tha one that shined mainly on this one, his verse was on point and his rhyme scheme was on point, u need more multis, other than that this colllab was illness, keep droppin tha hotness, thanks for tha replies by tha way.~1~
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10-20-03, 03:46 PM
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Edicius...
Your verse was simple, short and sweet, presented the message right there, flow was off the hook, makin it an easy read, yet still pokes fun at the mind because it has some deeper meaning coming up potent... your verse is the deeper meaning. Also short and sweet, this presented the topic in a deeper and more mind provoking way, where it makes me as the reader feel a lil' more sympathy for you. Both verses added up with the chemistry of each other and just made this a dope collaboration. Good Shit.
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10-20-03, 03:59 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Sympathy lol^
This is the result of two guys beein bored in msn... I was rushin this,..but thnx for the feed-back....^
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10-20-03, 04:01 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
both came ill on this.........very nice read...enjoyed
vocab was bangin and thr worplay and flow was niceness hottness all around on this hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721 |
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10-20-03, 05:34 PM
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IP: 9D61 E148
NO shit.. This took me & Thugz 7 minutes.. Yes 7 minutes to do.. b'cos we timed each other from as soon as the topic was thought up..
Props to Edicius & to G.Hod< There both my fam  |
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10-20-03, 05:41 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Werd..
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10-20-03, 07:50 PM
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Banned: Permanent
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IP: 5F2A E1C0
Way To Rep Guys..
Edicius.. Not A Bad Piece For Being Rushed.. Coulda Gone Into More Depth But Above Average.. Good Shit Pot1ent.. On A Steady Elevation Path. Your Really Shinin These Days Kid. Good Depth Here.. The Topic Was Nice, And You Both Did Good Representing It Here |
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10-21-03, 09:08 AM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Werd^
Thnx Up^
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10-21-03, 08:37 PM
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Eddy.
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IP: FF40 570D
Cmon peeps ..stop sleepin..
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10-22-03, 10:45 AM
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Veteran
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IP: FF89 3C60
This was a pretty good colab even though I'm not crazy about colabs...
I hate sharing ideas for some reason. Anyway... Great vocab, nice flow from both. Highlights what I feel to be unhappiness with society, unhappiness with crews, basically, it seems like giving up. Maybe that's what was meant. Fed up. Tired. Done. I can relate sometimes.
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