16 BARS
30 MIN
HERE'S MINE, BITE IF YOU LIKE, BUT DON'T CHOKE, THEM IS BIG WORDS COMING OUT YO MOUTH.

You ever seen a rockstar nigga
Reportin from the west
We come across Oracleez live in the flesh
What you know about the kid
I'll twist a nigga wig with a word
Faster than a nig could reach for his sig
Before you think about trying to let my blood out my body
Think about the shit bitch nigga you just might miss
Think about your kids that you might never kiss
What if your wife knew you chose your end life like this
Would she respect you for your kamikaze mission
She'd probably hate you for putting her in this fucked up position
Would she remember you as the man that you are
Or for the fool who challenged the Oracle to a duel
Where I'm from I'm Orakilla tha Hun lord of the slums
Second to none no second to come
Flow hot enough to super nova the sun the soldier the one
It's over it's done the one man never spoke of has come
For fear that the man woud choke on his tongue
Collapsing his lung the wrath of the one
The task has begun how many gonna last when it's done

i'm here an yer hearin me
yer queer an yer fearin me
you'll never entertain us, ya anus, ya hearin me?
por favor, just explain
how tha fuck u obtained
a couple of fake wins at the start of yer reign
mah heart is mah brain, an it speaks a lot wit da pain
that it recieved long ago when it was shot wit a cane
and what about orakilla?!!!!!
I will, uh, grill a orakilla, and I'll kill him at will
cuz i'm spillin' tha ill- and i'm willin ta kill...
ta kill, for tha thrill, of a vicadin pill,
i'm spikin tha wheel, an i'm also hikin tha hill!
nobody else will- deal the shit i'm tryin ta deal, i fly,an i feel-
and fuckin wonder "why am i filled?"
its cuz tha past 3 weeks, i wuz tryin ta get killed
mah mind was so filled- wit rhymes, this entire time, that they spilled right onto thy grill, so why should i feel
sympathy, 4 thee?
shut the fuck up now an let me be.

UPPIN 4 VOTES. WHO WAS TIGHTER?
HIT A NIGGA ON THE POLLS AND NO D/R PLEASE.

JUST AN HONEST VOTE WILL DO.

MY HONEST OPINION:
yOU ARE COOL JOHNNY, GREAT WORDPLAY, BUT YOU KINDA LOST ME IN THE MIDDLE OF YOUR RAP. NEED A LIL WORK ON THE STRUCTURE, GOT A FEW RUN ON LINES, BUT ALL IN ALL IT WAS COOL. KEEP WORKING AT IT, YOU GOT THE GIFT. IT JUST TAKES TIME TO DEVELOP. PM ME AND I'LL DROP YOU SOME HOT EXCLUSIVE SHIT. NOT MY B-GRADE BATTLE EFFORTS.

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The excellence of elocution

AND HERE'S my OPINION:

YOU ARE PRETTY DAMN GOOD TOO! THE ONLY TIME I LOST MAH TIMING IN YOUR RHYMING WAS ON LIKE 2 LINES ( I MEAN I DIDNT CATCH THE RHYME IN THEM) BUT IT WAS ONLY THE 2. I DON'T KNOW ABOUT MAHSELF, BUT YOU SURE DO GOT IT! YOU KEEP IT UP, TOO, DAWG, AIGHT? - PEACE

I cant vote but can I battle one of you two. Any of ya's. I'll set up and spit first............................................. ....


Peace!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect