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Tetra-Hydro 'white'
IP: 07E0 A9F2
Tetra-hydro ‘white’
Hell shit what is I supposed to do Im sittin here drinkin it and smokin it wit you I told my self to stop it to give my lung s a break To relieve the ache, unmake the damage I intake Anticipate in 10 years ill still be feelin great Doctors talkin shit with unfounded medical crit Bringin it to people whose lungs aint havin it Deliberate divulgence, of grade 1 cannabis Manikin im not, standin up for equal rights for this Creatin bliss, from givin drink drugs the miss Don’t think so, social problems will still exist Upheaval, of a multi million making evil Will destroy the economy like bomb of atom-ony Should make it legal, a little stash of hash, smokin grass Soothing the mind leave your body relaxed Sit back in ya chair, unwind, in ya left hand a pint, A joint in the right, first for the night Hittin hard, sweat pouring, fuckin face is goin white Next morning “this time im definitely stopping it for life” ………………………….lol….hit it plz |
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
nice flow man, no doubt, thats what kept me reading it
good structure as well hit ma open mic up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86934 |
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IP: 340D 8B8F
Yeah....this was a pretty good piece...it flowed pretty well through out it as i was reading it...your vocab was good, nothing wrong there i thought...your content was pretty good as well...structure was good...overall it was a good piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.
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IP: CCAE A7E8
thanx for the feedback, it was just a quick sumthin i wrote, while chillin smokin.............thnx agian.......peace
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IP: 06EF 4E9D
good drop
nice vocab n flow cud b a bit better but its good nonetheless 7.9/10 |
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BANNED
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IP: 7D89 C5B2
i liked the flow but there wasnt much else in there
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IP: 3767 D32E
it depends on how you look at it, have a smoke then read it, but THINK, bout it......lol....see ya
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