Tetra-hydro ‘white’

Hell shit what is I supposed to do
Im sittin here drinkin it and smokin it wit you
I told my self to stop it to give my lung s a break
To relieve the ache, unmake the damage I intake
Anticipate in 10 years ill still be feelin great
Doctors talkin shit with unfounded medical crit
Bringin it to people whose lungs aint havin it
Deliberate divulgence, of grade 1 cannabis
Manikin im not, standin up for equal rights for this
Creatin bliss, from givin drink drugs the miss
Don’t think so, social problems will still exist
Upheaval, of a multi million making evil
Will destroy the economy like bomb of atom-ony
Should make it legal, a little stash of hash, smokin grass
Soothing the mind leave your body relaxed
Sit back in ya chair, unwind, in ya left hand a pint,
A joint in the right, first for the night
Hittin hard, sweat pouring, fuckin face is goin white
Next morning “this time im definitely stopping it for life”

………………………….lol….hit it plz

nice flow man, no doubt, thats what kept me reading it

good structure as well

hit ma open mic up
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Yeah....this was a pretty good piece...it flowed pretty well through out it as i was reading it...your vocab was good, nothing wrong there i thought...your content was pretty good as well...structure was good...overall it was a good piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.

thanx for the feedback, it was just a quick sumthin i wrote, while chillin smokin.............thnx agian.......peace

good drop
nice vocab n flow
cud b a bit better but its good nonetheless

7.9/10

i liked the flow but there wasnt much else in there