Westology - Audio Written

you can,I can't contraddicted and time restricted as i paint a verbal portrait/
it's like emceein hasn't advanced my masterpeice depicted is only for non primates/
can't find the new element well then look at West through a magnifying glass/
i'm a new school fans requirement,discoverer of underground that appeals to mass/
the new form of rapnetic organism a merger of man,programme,hip hop netcee/
cut and paste encompassin your favourite genetic functions and tools in me/
my fans are like a crack addicts daily attack they need a fix just to stay alive/
dedicated listeners who attract to me like a proton to a nucleus so they survive/
rating my impact when i hit is like declaring monsoon,earthquake and hurricane/
i'm industry armageddon coz when i strike it'll be like hiroshima was just a stain/
call me four seasons coz i can be extremely hot or cold when i make emcees fall/
i'm like nitrogen dioxide tha freeze that burns and like goliath i stand tall/
it's a new era smart emcees caterin for the needs of the educated listeners/
i bring new school dissertations and hide them under your tables like prisoners/
and when my writtens are graded,old school seems faded then carbon date it/

Hook -

I don't know what the fuck you want from me/
but i gotta teach you tha rapform westology/
x4


the man,the myth,the legend stories of great fairytales but fiction isn't West/
i'm the immortal highlander who will not stop until there is only one emcee left/
i must speak multiple languages coz my interperatation through a mic is outragous/
tu ne comprande pas,understanding that means wordly representation is now contagous/
with volcanic flow i errupt like lava source and prepare to heat up historical news/
i'm the major headline,killer with no remorse like Adolf and slaughtered Jews/
if you were to put me in the hip hop stock exchange i'd be up on cents and pence/
50 of me to one cent with cash money only creating millionaires in the past tense/
west equals the new breed of pedigree emcee,i'm the species known as Scot's terrier/
when comparing me to other rappers it's like a man amongst muts they are inferior/
fuck buts i contribute to hip hop's structure and without my mind it couldn't maintain/
i'm not yet the heart of rap but i'm the transporter of it's DNA aka the vein/

Hook -

You don't know what the fuck you want from me/
but i gotta teach you tha rapform westology/
x2

you don't know

yo yo you don't know

Hook -

You don't what the fuck you want from me/
but i gotta teach you tha rapform westology/
x4

Nice, ...good vocab...

Flow was damn nice, ...good audio writtin..

The concept was nicely explained, ..had some ill lines in here..

the new form of rapnetic organism a merger of man,programme,hip hop netcee/
cut and paste encompassin your favourite genetic functions and tools in me/


Blazin!..

Overall a nice audio...good writtin,..nice aspects...good vocab nice flow..

Good drop..

Props..

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I was really feeling this piece.. I would like to hear the audio.. The flow was nice but the content of this was the best.. Um yeah good work west.. If its been recorded can you dorp link here

I'm lazy

dead up this was a great read and strong in every sence im glad you found your way back to the you i expected twin

Thanx dawgs.

Peace

pretty much in quoting everyone else
this was good, the flow seemed good but i think id rather hear the audio to see exactly how you approach it
no flaws here kid

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87052

Will do.Uppin.

Peace

Hit up ...

The pride of a ..Warchild!

Preciated..

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This shit was nice... flows very well throughout... good verses... great concepts... ill....

my fans are like a crack addicts daily attack they need a fix just to stay alive/
dedicated listeners who attract to me like a proton to a nucleus so they survive/

was my favorite verse.... I'd like to hear this one... holla...

thanx dawg,and wheres pride of a warchild at Thugz.

Peace

4 open mics under u

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87282

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sorry but the flow did fall off inseveral places (makes u wonder if half them read this^)
the actual topic wasnt original but kept myinterest because u used some interseting metaphores in it
some good vocabulary used thru out however to help the flow u cud use some more internals rhyming and multies cos i think as it is u'll be struggling to make it sound good with the bars as they are...some of the enders on the sentences also didnt rhyme
apart from that ^ its close to the best ive seen from you
you've begun to improve nearly every drop and your topics content has become alot more interesting to the reader

ok but every ender rhymed,it's makes me wonder if u read it.

Peace

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