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-Behind The Mask-
IP: B47A 7630
Havent Written in a while....
Here it Goes... *In class, reading a speech, decideds to break it out by freestyling.* Reading from a writen speech-- Emotions Remain Deep inside me No one can feel me, gotta go underneath, Deeply Can you Redeem Me? -Screw This, Lemme Break This Down...- Im comin out, You guys have push too many buttons I aint frontin, I've been hiding too long, Gotta say somethin Been showin you smiles and happiness, i been lyin It might be surprisin, but inside i feel like im dyin Emotions build up inside, and any moment ima burst Hold back from cursin, Each day, I never put my self first I've been hiding this for to long, Im here, Do i really belong? and you all been pickin me apart, I just wanna be gone I've lost all self esteem becuz of you, Look what you've done! Hook: You've never seen me on the Outside I remain Inside, Lettin Emotions Collide Makin it hard to see, So I Just Hide Its not hard to find, i only turn my back but now im done, im out from behind the mask Some people believe life has no reason Well im still breathin, but u make it feel like i should be leavin I still believin that miricales can happen You always remain in the past, why u care what happen back then? Do things in orderly fashion, or u'll find yo self back-track-in Hook: You've never seen me on the Outside I remain Inside, Lettin Emotions Collide Makin it hard to see, So I Just Hide Its not hard to find, i only turn my back but now im done, im out from behind the mask ...Just a start, dunno if i should add anymore verses... |
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IP: 7B82 FF66
this was a hot piece my nigga i was feelin it. i liked your vocab and your rhyme scheme. this was a nice piece.
my favorite line No one can feel me, gotta go underneath, Deeply Can you Redeem Me? ^^nice bar holla Last edited by e.coli : 10-22-03 at 04:44 PM. |
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