IVE POSTED THE START OF THIS BEFORE IVE EXTENDED IT AND POSTED AGAIN WHAT DO U THINK



YOU DONT KNOW ME SO HOW YOU GON JUDGE ME/
YOU DONT LIKE ME COS YOU AINT TRIED TO LOVE ME/
YOU CANT KISS ME BEFORE YOUVE EVEN HUGGED ME/
YOU DIDNT DO ANYTHING SO HOW YOU GET ABOVE ME/
HOW DO YOU SURVIVE IF THE WORLD DONT WANT YOU TO/
SURVIVAL OFTHE FITTEST ONLY PARTIALLY TRUE/
IF YOU FIT BUT BLACK THEY STIL BE AHEAD OF YOU/
THE FITTEST AROUND COULD STILL BE MADE TO BATTLE THROUGH/
ASK ANY BODY WHO MADE IT FAR/
Y DOES A BLACK MAN GOTTA WORK TWICE AS HARD/
ON PAPER THEY SAY WE GOT EQUAL RIGHTS/
PREJUDICE IS SOOMETHIN THAT HAPPENS IN THE MIND/
AND FROM THIS THOUGHT GROWS DISCRIMINATION/
WE AUTOMATICLY BEHIND IN THIS RACIST NATION/
I WISH EVERY BODY WOULD UNDERSTAND THAT/
I FALL CUT AND BLEED IM THE SAME IN BLACK/
AND I RAP FOR MY PEOPLE THOSE JUST LIKE ME/
LOOKING FOR JUSTICE IN AN UNJUST SOCIETY/
THE ONLY JJUST I SEE IS LIKE WE JUST A MINORITY/
THERES LESS OF US HERE AND SO WE TREATED JUST HORRIBLY/
WE DONT DESERVE TO BE BUT WE ARE JUST ANIMALS/
WE DONT NEED TO BE AROUND BECAUSE WE ARE JUST CANNIBALS/
LIFE STARTED IN AFRICA ITS SCIENTIFFICALLY PROVEN/
SO DONT THAT MEAN IF ANY THING WE ARE MORE HUMAN/
I DONT THINK WE ARE BUT ITS HARD TO UNDERSTAND/
WHY NOW THEY WANT US OUT THEY BROUGHT US OUT OF OUR LAND/
ITS HARD TO GET ROUND I HOPE I CAN LIFT YA/
STAND UP FOR YOURSELF LET ME PAINT A PERFECT PICTURE/

The Same In Black (Remix) Feat: Funn DementaLL

Many People say that my flow is gifted/
Spit lyrics like preachers, listeners get uplifted/
I fight for the same rights that Malcom insisted/
Not enough offical black candiates, OUR names are not listed/
Bow down at the ring an kiss this/
These white poiticans talk COOKIES, When we need biscuits/
They wreached, calls for SOLIDarity, backfired an formed liquid/
So, now we RUNNING, but not from them, from ourselves/ (Dreams vivid)
How can we endure when our lives short like elves/
our THOUGHTS only worth PENNIES that be stolen from wishing wells/
We gotta FACE this like a CLOCK, 12 till 12/
How does it help that our REALIFE is a COMIC/
a nusance labled atomic, We played by 'MASTER SYSTEMS' like 'Sonic'/
Revolt coz they act ignorant... Knowing our issues are all economic/

AND FROM THIS THOUGHT GROWS DISCRIMINATION/
WE AUTOMATICLY BEHIND IN THIS RACIST NATION/

Funn Out

I NEED FEEDBACK ON THE VERSE

Well, I liked it... the only thing it lacked is wordplay. I'm glad to see a UK rapper commin out with sumting to say... Represent.

This thread deserves attention!!! 2tha top with it.

NE1 ELSE

this was nice...the only thing you guyz need to work on is ya wordplay and ya multi'z...but eveything else was good in my opinion...keep doin' ya thing...and reply to one of my 3 opn mics on page 1...preferably Dinner Story...holla...

ILL PEACE INDEED I LIKED THE READ IT MAINTAINED MY ATTENTION PLEASE PPE MY NEW PEACE VERBAL LIMITS

WELL APPRECIATED

UPPIN