Po

The higher you build your skills the more it hurts to fall
I perverse to full b'cos whats dispersed was real cruel
Diverse feel is hauled. .But now i'm crashing & burning
But I didn't ignite my computer. .Now dashing at curling
Like Sam Richardson. . But unplanned thickle runs now
Have ever increasing fealings to pull out that gun & *pow*
But i've seen over the brow & that keeps me going on
I'm flowing wrong & letting down those thats holding on
Their strangling me, How can I believe when i can't breath
I'm lying at the bottom almost forgotten & I just plead
To be what I used to be. .





Dez


They say im 1/2 the man i used to be, But i still put my whole heart into life
Lately they dont seem to want me anymore, Theres no sunshine when its night
I went for the ride, It's hard when your former akin tells you that you are soft
Their verbals cut deep, The blood keeps flowin, Showing no signs of a clot
A real man cant be bought, But hes not loyal.. His price is just much to high
When i ljudged 'has-beens' & 'never-will-bes', I looked through ignorant eyes
Now i know why the Jordans & Holyfields never give up & never let go of hope
They've already reached the summit, So it's ok if their at the end of their rope
I've learned to cope with the fact that I may never reach that pinnacle
But know that my skills will never deplete, Ill never 'Fall Off'..



I just wont be as high on your pedastal

first verse was a bit too simple to grab my attention and although it stayed on topic po i dont think u put much effort in here

dez...another enjoyable read
liked your verse had more what i was looking for from the topic and dealt with it well

overall it was a decent read but not outstandng

^^Get on MSN pwezzz

This was decent... I really wasn't feelin' the first verse at all... but the second verse I was feelin'... especially the line...

'But know that my skills will never deplete, Ill never 'Fall Off'..
I just wont be as high on your pedastal'

I'll bet a lot of music artists who've come and gone can relate to that....

I wasn't really feeling my writings yesterday either. . I suppose it was a bad day. .I was tired as fuck & had been writing everday for the past week or two. .I'm giving it a rest for a couple of days. .

Dez tight verse bruv . .Props