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Old 10-23-03, 07:11 PM   #1
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[Wk3] Maddawg MKN vs LaRyan Shabaz

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Old 10-24-03, 11:14 AM   #2
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Destroyin beauty.......i'll go with this topic, checkin in, good luck man...............................peace,1
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Old 10-27-03, 12:03 AM   #3
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I have no idea what I'm going to do. I don't like making choices, I don't like this direction. I am in...
 
Old 10-28-03, 01:40 PM   #4
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Unless I have an unforseen change of heart, I'm going to drop out of this altogether. I'm really not in the mood at this point, and I think the choose-your-own-adventure shit sort of put me over the edge. Apologies.
 
Old 10-28-03, 04:32 PM   #5
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damn kid, i guess i will have to waste a good flow, f it, they will soon call me 7-0 in sacred scriptures battles, peace, 1
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Old 10-29-03, 06:47 PM   #6
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^wait...dont' waste that topic on a no show!...
it's mine!
 
Old 10-29-03, 07:03 PM   #7
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lol, i already wrote half, i have to finish it or sumthin damn. if i dont show we both lose, sorry man, peace, 1
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Old 10-30-03, 03:41 PM   #8
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Topic: Destroyin Beauty

Father (Kevin)
Son (Mike)


Hey dad…What’s tha significance of tha Stars and Stripes?/
It’s Freedom…son, and that’s what Guards your Lyfe/
It’s Security, even though it will be Dark Tanight, Stars will remain…to Spark tha Light/

Lyke uncle Marshall, always on call… to jumpStart your Bike/
Hahaha, come Park your Tyke, but Dad, I wasn’t Far from Right?
Lyke a bird can rely on its wings before it Starts in Flight?/
Mike, your Partially Right, Dad, how does a flag Guard your Lyfe?/
This country protects us; men take chances in war… display Heart in Fight/

We’ve fought Hard for Rights, Dad, will there ever be a ReSolution?/
Couldn’t we cover tha world with Love, Instead of Pollution?/

There are too many enemies with cruel intentions and we cant Begin to Move Them/
They Spread Illusions, its almost impossible to End tha Movement/


Their language…”Sin” is Fluent, Clinch Tyme and Wait/
Only sanity pleads against tha Devine and Great, United States/
“Why tha Hate? Because “Evil” arrives in all Sizes and Shapes/
No worries son, these “criminals” will Find their Fate/

Mike drops a dish and it shatters…Kevin screams Time to Flank/
Get down, get down, there’s no Tyme to Waste/
Kevin dives on tha floor
Mike Cries and Shakes than yells Dad, I’m Afraid/
(Kevin regains composure) My Mind is Blank…he closes his Eyes and Faints/
(Hour later) I’m sorry son, sometimes to obtain freedom there’s a large Price to Pay/

Now, I’m Understandin Less, Son…I suffer from a disorder…Post Traumatic Stress/
Both body and mind…Battles Test, it feels like I’m locked up inside, but Shackle Less/

Did this happen a long time ago, when you Packed and Left/
When mom was Sad…
Depressed, son…I left for war, murdered under Massive Stress/
Before I go…I Have to Suggest, that War is only hatred (Destroyin Beauty) At its Best/
Its Tragic Mess, just protect your mom… and rememba I luv you in ways I Cant Express/

Dad, don’t Vanish…Lets/ (Kevin disappears, Mike wakes up) MOM, tell me more about Dad’s Death/

War is Surely Moving, think about all tha lives we are Poorly Losing/
No coinciding with Joy and Duty, when all that’s happening is Destroying Beauty/
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Old 10-30-03, 06:56 PM   #9
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^^^thats was straight ill.... omg legends material
 
Old 10-31-03, 02:52 AM   #10
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it was good..legendary? i think you're just getting your freeposts in ashole ^
 
Old 10-31-03, 01:25 PM   #11
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nyce lookin mad man, dont hate feeble, stay real, peace, 1
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Old 10-31-03, 01:29 PM   #12
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my bad, thanx for tha props Ill, i dont know why i typed mad man, wtf.......clerification done, uppin it, peace
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Old 10-31-03, 02:02 PM   #13
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Maddawg, That Was A Dope Drop, pretty deep, The only thing I need to ask you to do, is Work on your flow, I caught it, but it got choppy at some points. Good Fucking drop.
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Wow.. This Was Dope.. I Mean Really Dope.
The Flow Was Great, The Material Was Great.
The Story Was A Great Outlook.. The Ending
Was Beautiful. The Whole Color Scheme Was
On Point, Yet Confusing At TImes.. Really
Sux That It Was A No Show
 
Old 10-31-03, 11:54 PM   #15
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nyce lookin with tha feedback, mad appreciated, lyft it, stay real, peace, 1
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