All of a sudden you feel two pains in the back
body goes limp, legs give way and you hit the black.
Clouds cover your eyes blood the pressure rise
doves flock and fly, women and children cry.
everything spins, body cringes, you think you gonna die,
fires burn as lead in your spine, tears run from your head to mind.
Gun barrel shines, no time to move an inocent dead in a crime.
how does it happen, young kids strappin and cappin,
if only they knew about what they was taken.
Just doin it to be in, not knowin the reprocusion,
killin with out thinking aiming at whoever is passin.
lying on the ground the blood starts to pour,
movement is impossible, you get cold at the core.
now the noisies are quiet your mind tries to deny it,
only its truth is ever present, theres no way to defy it.
parts go numb your heart no longer beats like a drum
quiet sun gives no heat to a body about to surcome.
real things turn fake when your life is a stake,
sight looks bleak and your wills about to break.
take memories of the life you lived and the ones you loved,
ulterior space is heaven where you look down from above.
valiantly wishing for a chance to dance with your wife again,
widowed just sitting wondering if your looking down from heaven.
xebec sail through clouds pushed by spirits unforgiven.
you can only partly recall why you look on these people and cry.
zion cheers as the lion cries that final time you closed your eye.

-END

In case you havent got it yet, look at the first letter of each line.

I did this to challange my self, it is a lot harder than thought it would be, especially at the end.

Vocab

ulterior = lying farther away in time
xebec = three masted ship

hey i saw someone do something HARDER than this...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74549