Just some stuff I wrote. Feedback would be great. Question. Can we swear on this sight?


She walks with her head down
because bullies keep kicking her down.
Her head hits the floor, blood drips out,
and she has no confidence to raise her brow.
Who gives a s*** about the way I look?
Should I? Because my face makes you look?
I look normal to me when I look in the mirror,
when my fist hits the glass and makes me fear,
my mental health, I'll take each ounce,
open the cap and I will bounce.
I love these advils, they take it away,
the headaches I get everyday.

The spit was kinda deep but longer lines might bring out your message a lil more... over all it was kooo.
The flow wasnt da best but you got some potential if you keep writin from your soul kid.
P.S. yeah we can phukin curse on this sight.
LOL
Holla back put me on your Buddy List if you wanna collab sometimes aiight!!!