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High Times *The Sequel* (feat. Masta C)
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Hey everybody just a quick word before u read this piece. I advise u to read High Times (feat. Masta C) "before" u read this one so u understand from where we left off with from the first piece. so if u haven't read the first high times yet, read it before u read this one. Leave some feedback for both pieces if u got the time. muchly appreciated and thanx in advance. peace.
Verse #1: (written by Gene Pool) 20 years have passed me by, now I got 3 children, and alison as my wife by my side/ and here I am, still livin the good life and tha high times, but tha old life will neva leave my mind/ sure I miss all my high school friends, Greg, tyler, and ma best friend Sven/ if it weren’t fo them? I would have neva have met alison, and I’d proply be dead/ I remember that time I almost fell off that cliff, 200 feet to a huge cement brick/ woulda been buried, and yea we were all scared as shit, cuz we were trippin on that bag a weed we hit/ but if it weren’t fo ma friends, to stop me from plummeting to my death/ I would be buried 6 feet, and laid ta rest, thas why I gotta give praise ta Sven/ but I was pissed, when I found out that little bitch ripped my shirt/ so I pounded his ass so bad, and he nearly cried and I said “bitch u ain’t hurt!”/ but every time I drink, I drink to my best of friends/ and at that moment I just think, just think of where life has left them/ Verse #2: (written by Masta C) High times are never forgotten, will always be in memory.. Cause good times in the past and I know there will be ahead-of-me.. I remember back in the day, when i was just start-n-out.. Things were easy, but then they got harder-now.. But its still all fun-n-games, cause i make ya run-in-shame... I shunned-ya-fame, and im not the One-to-blame... You tried to sue me with a weak law-suit.. i saw-through, and it turned out that i bought-you... You gave no more-lip, now you ask me for-tips… But I just say “no” because your nothing, your-shit… Chorus: high times, and the high life, let’s get this away from the bad strife/ - (Gene Pool) to think about the good times, that have passed us by, cuz it’s the meaning of life/ - (Gene Pool) Always living in the good times, having them replayed in ya mind/ - (Masta C) Lifes about having fun, before your time runs out and ya done/ - (Masta C) cuz u only live once, so get out their and enjoy life all u want/ - (Gene Pool) and don’t be scared, to take a chance and run, cuz lifes all about da fun/ - (Gene Pool) Verse #3: (written by Gene Pool) as the years go by, I’ve lived out my life, and now I got 5 grandchildren, that like to put up fights/ but like me, I cut through the strife, cuz I know what life is like, in a teenagers plight/ but their all doin fine, so are my 3 sons, all with beautiful wives/ wives who will watch out for them and always stay by their side/ and as for me, nearly goin onto the ages of 60, and my wife still with me/ god I love livin this good scene, cuz it’s more then a thrill for well being/ and I remember just a few weeks ago, I met up with my best friend/ and I said to Alison “well wouldn’t ya know. It’s Sven”/ and the 3 of us talked for hours on end, catchin up on good life, with lots of time to spend/ and at this time, everything seemed the same again, as old child hood friends/ but now my life, back to the way it was, Sven left back to the place from where he come/ and the time for this song almost done, so I give praise, once again to all my homies who have been left astray/ say thanx today, and save the goodbye for another day, ahhh, gotta love the good ol ways/ when I remember ma life, of the highest times, of yesterday/ Verse #4: (written by Masta C) High times lived in minds, always remembered and will-be.. And no matter what happens, fame or failure, im still-me.. I remember the first-time, I started to hurt-minds.. With complex word-rhymes, probably my worst-crime.. Cause my brain-ached, wishing I could relieve the same-take.. And this fame-makes, nothing but more lame-fakes… I remember when I broke-laws, cause I wrote-flaws.. And I joked-all, but I beat everyone cause I spoke-raw… Now I fry-minds with a lyrical oven, cause Im in my-prime.. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh remember the good old high-times.. Chorus: high times, and the high life, let’s get this away from the bad strife/ - (Gene Pool) to think about the good times, that have passed us by, cuz it’s the meaning of life/ - (Gene Pool) Always living in the good times, having them replayed in ya mind/ - (Masta C) Lifes about having fun, before your time runs out and ya done/ - (Masta C) cuz u only live once, so get out their and enjoy life all u want/ - (Gene Pool) and don’t be scared, to take a chance and run, cuz lifes all about da fun/ - (Gene Pool)
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Yeah, if you check it out leave us some feedback on this, its much appreciated, thanks.
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YO that song was tight i liked how yall did tha chorus kinda like a cypher type thing it was dope Keep it up.............that song will be great in audio
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uppin this for some more feedback. keep it comin peeps. thanx in advance.
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Hey thanks for the feedback, keep the feedback coming, its much appreciated, thanks.
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yo ppl if ur gonna view this piece leave us some feedback plz it would be muchly appreciated. thanx in advance.
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just brousing and seen this colab, and was wondering why i wasn't invited to join the festivities....lol
but yeah nice colab, wont go into detail, but thought the hook was a bit weak, stronger verses...aight...holla! |
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lol sorry Deva...next time...I swear.....But Anyway thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, its much appreciated, thanks.
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uppin fo some more feedback come on ppl lets get some views in here.
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Like deva touched on, the hook needs more work. The verses seemed to mesh better in this one, but the hook needs some elevation in it. Don't get me wrong, I liked the drop, but you could put more heart into the hook. Keep up the elevation homies..
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thanx for the feedback guys but let's keep it comin here. muchly appreciated thanx in advance. peace.
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Not a bad collabo... Flow was good for Masta C.. but Gene, tweak the flow a bit, shorten some lines, then you'll be good aight? Masta, you had the flow down and also some good lines.
I remember the first-time, I started to hurt-minds.. With complex word-rhymes, probably my worst-crime.. Cause my brain-ached, wishing I could relieve the same-take.. And this fame-makes, nothing but more lame-fakes… I remember when I broke-laws, cause I wrote-flaws.. And I joked-all, but I beat everyone cause I spoke-raw… ^^ That whole part right there was dope dog. Nice shit. Gene, can't forget about the lines that caught my eye from you. as the years go by, I’ve lived out my life, and now I got 5 grandchildren, that like to put up fights/ but like me, I cut through the strife, cuz I know what life is like, in a teenagers plight/ ^^ Very nice, good flow. Good imagery, talkin bout how ya grandkids like to put up fights. I remember that time I almost fell off that cliff, 200 feet to a huge cement brick/ woulda been buried, and yea we were all scared as shit, cuz we were trippin on that bag a weed we hit/ ^^ Great Flow ! Flow makes the piece. Hook was average, definately needs a lil work. Jus work on the hook, and Gene, work on the flow a bit, and this will turn into a good audio. -Formula. *Feedback appreciated for my two drops: Dear Mom and Dad and I Did You Wrong*
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yo nyce rhymes nyce verses and nyce chorus it was da shit and nyce work alltogether it was dope yall aight
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