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Old 10-28-03, 09:26 PM   #16
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aight, good vocab
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Old 10-29-03, 12:52 PM   #17
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn. leave some feedback. thanx in advance.
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<center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

<center>Corrupted Visions</center>

<center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>
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Old 10-30-03, 08:22 PM   #18
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uppin this so ppl can read this one before they read the sequel. leave some feedback on this if u want.
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<center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>
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Old 10-30-03, 08:42 PM   #19
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For a simple structure this drop had good flow. For a collab, it did not stray from topic as many collabs do. I think you both got your points across, I just would rather see more complexity and emotion in this drop. I cant say I could rap it out, but I know it would be much better in an audio, if performed well. I think the topic is a bit played but this drop kind of hit upon other aspects of living that life.

keep elevating

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