beat
beat was nice, i liked the intro.

flow/delivery
stayed flowing all the way through the song, i liked your delivery

lyrics/topic
i like the topic an shit, hatin on my race, it all cool though.
the lyrics was good.

quality
i got this song in a shitty quality. fix that shit dawg




overall nice drop
7/10

^ I ain't hatin, dawg. I'm a Michael Rappaport fan! LOL, Just statin the facts. It's sorta like talkin about sex with your parents for the first time; you feel mad uncomfortable, but the subject needs to be addressed, so you can better understand whats going on.

I wrote this shit cause I noticed a lot of white folks saying, "why don't y'all let that slavery shit go, it's in the past". They never understood that because of slavery, we have problems today! So we can't forget it. I tried my best with this to explain, I was not tryin to come off bashin white folks or come off angry.

nah dawg, it cool dawg i aint tryin to bring hate,
im british an i dotn hav a fuckin clue who
micheal rappaport
is, i dont like racists an i kno, its a touchy issue for some peeps, i personally, dont mind racism in rap, sum times it vring out the best in peeps, it only wen that shit start to get personal i dont like it.

any wayz i checked out sum more of ur shit on soundclick, it all great shit, but ur quality, dawg...

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