Lm - Mom im sorry
Masta C - I need u
Fgee - Sunk!?
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Fuck Love !

RythmicTendicies, Edicius & Potent..

Edicus & Potent bringin it to u, like two Angels in disceuse from above,
but we aint coming in peace hell no,we gonna tell u somthing bout fuck love!.

Yo Rythmic tell em dawg...

[Chorus]

[RythmicTendicies ]
One, Two, Three, Four, And I Want More...
My Dick Can’t Take No More Raw Hardcore...
Fuck Love, And Everything That “Cums” With It...
I’d Rather Just Pleasure Her, With My Tongue On her Clit...

[Edicius]
Aint no fukkin bullshit no close shit,holdin hands,
fuk that give me a bad bitch makin my dick dance.
Makin me cum, and still my fukkin money is save,
picture that thats like a dream were she at? what cave?
Man if i knew i would tell u fuck that than her ass's mine
fo real lookin for a bitch who, dont like $ damn is that a crime
But a passion for suckin dick, damn this thought is sick
but fuck it i know u want it to,cuz a tongue is made to lick!
Just a big fat wet pussy, without fukkin bullshit around,
a slut suck me so good she makin me flowin above the ground.
Damn one day its fo real no more love fuck that put it to a stop
u can deny and feel in love and happy,still pussy is made to fuck!

[Chorus]

[RythmicTendicies ]
One, Two, Three, Four, And I Want More...
My Dick Can’t Take No More Raw Hardcore...
Fuck Love, And Everything That “Cums” With It...
I’d Rather Just Pleasure Her, With My Tongue On her Clit...

[Potent]
My expertise are only being an expert tease to whores
Rich men get it easy when they insert cheese to score
Pervert needs are applauded for once cuz these cunts
Purr at my vert in work but when its all done they hunt
I run & stunt from them cuz they want me untill the end
Only when looking in their garage do I reveal their bendz
They've a feel to spend cash,I hate when they cum back
Most blokes don't but they hoax it & then they stun cats
I lunge at pussy in a disguise goatee then whisk her off
So they don't get to know me but so I can hit your spot

Im clear-of-ya-souls. .

Yo hope u got the message...and for now...Fuck Love ! we out..

Aiight, the piece was average. Yea, it flowed well, but I wasn't really feelin either verse. I liked the chorus tho.

Edicius:

Wasn't feelin any of your lines, simplistic shit, nawmean? Don't take it the wrong way, but I jus didn't really get into your verse.

Potent:

Was an improvement from Edicius, but still average. Ya had a nice bar tho.

They've a feel to spend cash,I hate when they cum back
Most blokes don't but they hoax it & then they stun cats
^^ I was feelin that.

Rythmic Tendicies:

Hook was nice, got it's point across.

OVERALL: As I haven't read other drops from ya'll, I can't say much about ya skills, but I'd say to Edicius: Up ya verses a bit, get a lil more complex, ya feel me? And to Potent: Verse was nice cuz, keep droppin and uppin. Nice piece altogether.

Check out:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89235
And drop a reply aight?

-Formula.

kind of a hardcore stle verse
the chorus fitted the verse well i thought
edicius...hmm...lines flowed pretty solidly
content was straight to the point and not bad to read
potient outshone both though
some really creative writing and liked the wordplay in there alot...plenty stand out lines possibly the best ive seen from you

overall u collabed well...fuck love ...just what i thought

Werd, i told potent write ur way and take the wp and creative things, ..cuz i was just pissed, and wrote, ..some shit that would sound tite on audio its writin to a beat fuck wp and other shit just if it sounds good on a beat..clubber some shit, ..its all good lol^...this was more for the fun to do than real ..topical writin...lol^^ Fuck love gimme pussy^^

Useally dont write like this, ..but it was fun to do ... = )

Up^

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damn you fellas are pissed...=)
but overall good.
Rhythmic was ok.wasnt feeling it much

Edicious not much content just straight out raw
could have chosen better vocab to fit his piece
and just a little bit more structure...other than that Good.

Potent like always good structure and flow and everything
that makes your verse outshine the others but mos def
not your best work also seemed mad....

Pussy is good to you if u treat pussy good...=)

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