check in you go first and dont be a bitch
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Picks up mic....*yawns*.....Starts to spit......

I tell u....U aint that 'nice' on 'mic'........
Even if albert einstien wrote your battle script you still couldnt comethrough 'precise'....
I'm a King of Kings!! My *Diss* Betta!! watch urs get 'Fastly Pass'......
why'll Punish'em always here to 'stop-your-flow' like 'Maxi~pads'.....
Meet me in the FCL u'll get Blazed 'Slow'..cuz i Break 'Hoes'....
i'm so *Ill* i could 'No Show' and u'll still get 'K.O''d'....
Bite my shit but bitch I dare-you-to-eat-it, even my old "wraps" are tighter than Mummified Pharoah's-of-Egypt!......
Its like i battlle u wit a bullet proof vest the way i 'block-mind-tricks'......
U betta Than me???.....Thats like sayin u'll make the 'top-nine-list'......
'Go-ahead'.....'Try-ur-best'.....and i still think u have no chance of 'passing-this-test'.....
Dont try to shelid This.....Cus my punches 'connect' 95 'percent' of the time.....Like Msn 'internet'....
Ur rhymes remind me of my sister,and shes years old....Could u be any 'Softer?'.......
If i would here ur name in the radio...I would probaly think it was a 'Boxer'.......

The End......
My 'Plot' was to murder you...and i aint gonna 'stop'.....
Get this kid....I could disinigrate ur rhymes in the oven....and they still wudent be labeled under 'hot'......

Your turn.....

That wasent all i got Cus u said like 10 lines....I did 13....So you could do 13 lines.....If u dont spit in 20 mins,i win by D.Q....Cus i aint got all day....1

Yo bee...I aint got all day....Its been 10 mins already....U got 10 more.....I dont wanna win by D.Q.....Hurry up dun...1

Yo wats really good with you....if u aint spit in 5 mins i win....I gotta Bounce in 5 mins.....U better hurry up sanchez....1

damm....U clearly said spit right away...and to dont be a bitch about it but how i see u the bitch...its been more than half an hour after i spit and u havent dropped.....U better drop...1

wtf? first of all no! i told u 2 write a 10 line verse, not 20 lines of the worst...
now i must burst my gathering pitfall, liquidized methods of putting a boner threw yer capulary, and this is the first...
copy-righted? damn that name so wak i fell down and purposly killed my self with a tak, so small like yer shreveled dick...
functions, qualities, and everything is what you lack...
fuck yer self in the ass with a stick and get pricked while i rape yer mother with a gigantic error of glitch...
from hidden? bitch! shut the fuck up and simply die...
bitch im catastrawfic, infecting a new bacteria, so cry...
coming around my throne and get dacapatated with the mic...
im lengendary and yer the produce dairy, im scary and some disagree if im even liked...
thinking u from the army when you really suck dick, so lick my girth as u spazum and tweak out and eat my shit...

blah...

Finally bee....How does this work?..The ppl vote?....If its like that,Then start voting....Good battle sanchez...1

i only was gonna spit 10 lines but yers was long so whateva...
uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
peep game this
ismael vs holster
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The peeps gotta write for who they voted clearly...and the reason...Not just "i vote for sanchez''.....1

Yo.....peeps....get the votes in....Show some love.....The battle was done yesterday night and no one has voted....Who one dis battle?.....Holla...1

read the rules copy
dont free post so much
just write
uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
like 5 times thats it
holla
check out me vs holster please

Ok, the breakdown:


Copy~Righted- Ur 1st bar was wack, had no complexity and the flow was waaaay off. After that, u seemed to have settled in. Some of punches hit hard, like the Boxer line was nice. Had a personal in it which always helps. Flow was off at times but decent. Try to match ur amount of syllables for each line, it will help the flow. Creativity was mostly there, finisher was kind of soft but not a bad verse overall.

Ismael Sanchez- Ok, ur flow was off, really really off. You constantly had a short line, followed by long line, followed by two short lines, or somethin like that. It also affects the punch itself, so try to stick with whatever amount of syllables u start with. Any "suck dick" lines are played and wack, so try to limit them to 0. Punches were not quite there, complexity was there but no creativity.


Overall, I'm a give it to Copy~Righted because of harder hittin punches and had a better flow. Sry, can't poll yet pz.

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reppin strong, wurdshizle

ok>;o) sure buddy
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