10 to 15 lines you spit first
no hate votes
no DR votes
no bitin

I'ma 'beat you' and leave you 'centsless' like an olive skinned Cuban cabbie//1
Leave you bruised badly and confused when I scream "who's ya' daddy?"//2
The best part of you spewed out ya' moms in an '82 caddy//3
Afta she got gang-banged by a few homeless dudes for a Newie and 2 Natties//4
You need to take a rest with ya' gay threats that don't make sense...
Fuck the Stage section, I'll 'kill a beat' when shots 'Cross ya' Heart' like Play-tex//5
Your brain's a mess....You should be the posterboy 4 latex...//6
you're the reason crack an base-heads should be practicin' safe sex//7
You'll NEVER elevate like wingless birds wearing weighted vests...//8
Like thin ladies obsessed with they guts, to me(tummy), you're a 'waist of stress'//9
AND a 'waste of flesh' like double-chins with over-abundant skin...
I'm a Dr., you're a personal Trainer, 'You got my patients running thin'//10

quick 10

aight here it is

opener:
the only way a bitch'll get in my intro
is through ridin my dick
it says he's a dude in his info
but he's in it so he must be a chick

Verse:

your punches are as effective as broken bricks on some walls
found ya name in tha restroom for smokin dicks in tha stalls
I shouldn't battle a kid that admits when he's GOOFY
MICKEY MOUSE lines are played now your merkin's my duty
this kids out of Jax(jacksonville) and thinks he's a true G
gettin slayed by my axe but right now he's just woozy

Close:

if your look'n to win your best chance is bitin
so reach for your purse and pull out a pen
now write down my verse from begging to end
hell just cut and paste so you wont be mis spell'n

aight there ya go somethin quick now lets get some votes

Flow: Goofy
Punches: Goofy
Personals: Slim
Vocab: Goofy [By Far]
Enjoyment: Goofy
Overall: Goofy (4-1)

Oh yah.... I forgot to say you have to have a mod poll my vote..... I am over 100 posts but it just doesnt let me poll vote....

yo Goofy hit much harder, VA flow was too basic, not hard hitting, but overall decent battle yall, keep elevatin

vote = Goofy for flow, punches, vocab, structure.

props to VA for this punch though:
"I shouldn't battle a kid that admits when he's GOOFY
MICKEY MOUSE lines are played now your merkin's my duty"

LOL

Goofy fo every thing such as flow, punches, vocab, structure,disses and eveything else.Slim was to basic elevate

Yeah...

No hate ta either slinga...

But, I gotta toss my vote to Goofy as well.

VA just came abit simple, the opener was sweet, the rest: grade school.

No hate, but Goofy wordplayed ya ta death.

Some of that shit was pretty clever, "Playtex", the "waist" line...

That shit was funny and hit hard.

Better punches and wordplay win this.

Peace

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Yo whaddup with Goofy he's a newb wiv the style of a vet. He slayed that cat on vo cab, style, flow and punches. Good verse from slim thouh.

Peace

Lets get one more vote to end this coward...4-0=me i'm too good for these newbies i need some comp....about to get my first victory...

Flow-GOOFY
Metas-GOOFY
Personals-GOOF
Word play-GOO
Vocab-G...

Well this was a surprise. I think Goofy took all areas. He was surprisingly better. Nice shit.

Its over i win.. close this shit i'm 1-0....Nice battle kid you judt didn't try harder than you could but you have to elvATE MORE THEN COME BACK

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