i replied to: Snakeyes - True Lies

Baron replied to: Walter Wall - Maturity
fgee - suicide dream




On the quest for lost inspiration, i tried to Reconfigure
the artists that Lost the Picture along w. the Costs and Fixtures
Its all liquor, platinum and ice, not what matters inside
is this what happens when life,
means less than what your rapping or write?
im lacking the fight to challenge our cultures hurried destruction
but am i worried over nothing, is the subject of disscusion. .

See, some people feel its good the two genre's have Crossed Over,
"the whole 'hip-pop' era can only bring our culture more Exposure"
these Folks Are kidding me, right?! because There's No Way,
the same kids singing to britney'll be bobbing their Heads to Cage!
girls Wearing Braids, bubble gum teens hearing D. Stroy and,
turning on Celph after learnin the lyrics of their favourite boy band?
"But im not trying to stay underground as a Rhyme Prophet,
I'd rather sell out. . and then see My Pockets, Sky Rocket!"
Guys, Honestly. . what goods money if you cant voice your opinion,
your just a manufactured gimick, made to appeal to the children.

whatever happened to 'fight the power?' another misconstrued idea,
seems rappers today are being controlled by a puppeteer,
corrupt radio stations,forcing them to adhere,
because the only emcees 'keepin it real',no-one gets to hear,
the sheer ignorance,that cars and ice have relevance,
when across the world,theres millions of starving infants,
hip hop used to be a social commentry,
now watered down and disolved into music for a party,
placed in the same bracket as pop and RnB,
it'll merge into one eventually,even ex spice girls are wannabe emcees,
now big business,hip hop caught the attention of big companys,
faceless corporations gained interest now our music is worth mega money,
my love for the culture,starts to slowly fade,
ripped away by the people who invade,and caused it to mutate,

dooooooooooppppppppeeeeeeeeee


this was incredible guys. your points are well take and very visual.


im lacking the fight to challenge our cultures hurried destruction
but am i worried over nothing, is the subject of disscusion.


amazing lines..


the only bad part about this whole piece was...



it ended.

corrupt radio stations,forcing them to adhere,
because the only emcees 'keepin it real',no-one gets to hear,

up..... ill try and check out everyone who replys drops,

Real dope and deep piece ya'll dropped. Not being able to distinguish which MC wrote which verse, i'ma jus point out the good stuff in both.

Both had the flow on point, multi's, vocab. 2nd verse had a flashback, which was dope (Fight the Power). Loved the premise at the beginning, it brought up a dope bar:

im lacking the fight to challenge our cultures hurried destruction
but am i worried over nothing, is the subject of disscusion. .

1st Verse was ill, everything was dope, flow was on-point. Dope Bar(s):

these Folks Are kidding me, right?! because There's No Way,
the same kids singing to britney'll be bobbing their Heads to Cage!
girls Wearing Braids, bubble gum teens hearing D. Stroy and,
turning on Celph after learnin the lyrics of their favourite boy band
^^^ Fucking real, and Ill too, very nice.

2nd verse kept the pace and delivered just as good as the 1st did. Flow, multi's, everything was there to make it equally as good as the 1st. Dope Bar(s):

whatever happened to 'fight the power?' another misconstrued idea,
seems rappers today are being controlled by a puppeteer,
corrupt radio stations,forcing them to adhere,
because the only emcees 'keepin it real',no-one gets to hear,
^^^ Again, Fucking Real and very dope. Great job.

OVERALL: Both of ya'll MC's did a great job on this Open Mic. Very dope and ya'll stayed on the topic and flowed well the whole piece. Great work.

-Formula.

** Peep this-- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89771 It's similar to ya'lls Collab.. Feedback appreciated. Much thanks. **

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this was tight !!!!

i'm fillin this piece all the way and it's stright pushin sh*t out the way keep it up

holla back

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i'm between a beat and a hard place

up........drop links and ill get back to you....

Agreed Fully.. Dope Piece Here Guys
Baron Tore Up The Collab
Rob Portrayed The Shit Nicely
..Really Dope Collab All In All

9.5/10

Reply Here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=90113

^^lol, how did you no who wrote what?

anyway ill go check out your piece

^ I got at him on AIM, thats how he knew. = )

Word though, i'll reply to his shortly.